I would appreciate feedback on my site, plz!!

trishauptown · 2007-08-19, 05:28 PM

If you have the time I would love and appreciate a fresh set of eyes to take a look at my site and give their opinion on how I could improve upon it.......Thanks www.trishauptown.com

oldbrad · 2007-08-19, 06:38 PM

A few things i noticed were the index page had tons of misspelled words like "barley legal" and "cute little while full back panites".

There isn't much of a tour to get the surfer to really get turned on and want to join. Also the main page with the options on it in the big x pattern, i like the way it looks but it is really hard to read the sections. Especially the "girl girl" and auction ones. The color is too light and blends in. Those things fixed with a tour could really work well. I have had the best luck with tours that show the episodes and whatnot (like couplesseduceteens at topbucks).

Other than those couple things, i like the design and i think you could sell well.

Brad

Simon · 2007-08-19, 09:09 PM

It may be a little hard to get affiliates to sign up and send traffic if your tour offers things like wish lists of things you'd like bought for you and auctions of your personal items -- unless your program has a way that the affiliates are paid on those sales too. I didn't look too deeply into your affiliate program, but it seems to be a 50/50 revshare on memberships only.

ScreaM · 2007-08-20, 07:08 AM

You could make the font a size bigger. Makes reading easier.

Ramster · 2007-08-20, 08:22 AM

I like the pictures you offer and the downloads too. But as already said a more traditional tour would get more affiliates pushing it. You could have a tour1.html page that affiliates send traffic to that has pictures, then movies, then the other info and the index can be for typin traffic so you still get the download links and others there.

Ronzo · 2007-09-01, 04:22 PM

As the saying goes, "There's always room for improvement". But, with your site, Trisha, I'm kind of hard-pressed to see anything that would prevent you from having some measure of success with it. I think it's a fine effort. For me, "tours" are like art... their appeal is in the eye of the beholder. Your tour is professional looking and attractive in its design. There's no "turn off" factor at all in it for me. And, with solo girl type sites like yours, I've always found that surfers need to connect with you (the star of the site) and become infatuated fairly fast if there's a chance of closing the sale. I believe there's enough of you being revealed through your bio and sample pics and videos to make that kind of connection possible if the "chemistry" is there. Don't be afraid to really make it all about you. It's the "wow" factor that guys (and girls) are looking for... wish you the best with it!

trishauptown · 2007-12-11, 07:38 PM

Thanks guys!!! I have some typical tours in mind.....I have been hearing that the most.

I made the font bigger, thanks scream!!

Greenguy · 2007-12-12, 03:47 PM

Timely

LD · 2007-12-12, 04:56 PM

Damn good looking site if you ask me.

2007-08-19, 05:28 PM	#1
trishauptown Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 16	I would appreciate feedback on my site, plz!! If you have the time I would love and appreciate a fresh set of eyes to take a look at my site and give their opinion on how I could improve upon it.......Thanks www.trishauptown.com __________________ TrishaUptown.com NOW LIVE at That One Progam

2007-08-19, 06:38 PM	#2
oldbrad It is better to watch things then to do them Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: oregon Posts: 485	A few things i noticed were the index page had tons of misspelled words like "barley legal" and "cute little while full back panites". There isn't much of a tour to get the surfer to really get turned on and want to join. Also the main page with the options on it in the big x pattern, i like the way it looks but it is really hard to read the sections. Especially the "girl girl" and auction ones. The color is too light and blends in. Those things fixed with a tour could really work well. I have had the best luck with tours that show the episodes and whatnot (like couplesseduceteens at topbucks). Other than those couple things, i like the design and i think you could sell well. Brad __________________ Help MrMaryLou Link to his Chubby TGP & Chubby Links on your sites and blogs.

2007-08-19, 09:09 PM	#3
Simon That which does not kill us, will try, try again. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Conch Republic Posts: 5,150	It may be a little hard to get affiliates to sign up and send traffic if your tour offers things like wish lists of things you'd like bought for you and auctions of your personal items -- unless your program has a way that the affiliates are paid on those sales too. I didn't look too deeply into your affiliate program, but it seems to be a 50/50 revshare on memberships only. __________________ "If you're happy and you know it, think again." -- Guru Pitka

2007-08-20, 08:22 AM	#5
Ramster Life is good Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Ottawa, Canada Posts: 11,705	I like the pictures you offer and the downloads too. But as already said a more traditional tour would get more affiliates pushing it. You could have a tour1.html page that affiliates send traffic to that has pictures, then movies, then the other info and the index can be for typin traffic so you still get the download links and others there. __________________ Pornstar Legends \| Live Cam Model Shows \| Hungarian Girls Skype: robmurray999

2007-12-11, 07:38 PM	#7
trishauptown Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 16	Thanks guys!!! I have some typical tours in mind.....I have been hearing that the most. I made the font bigger, thanks scream!! __________________ TrishaUptown.com NOW LIVE at That One Progam

2007-08-20, 07:08 AM	#4
ScreaM Asleep at the switch? I wasn't asleep, I was drunk Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 218	You could make the font a size bigger. Makes reading easier.

2007-09-01, 04:22 PM	#6
Ronzo WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 40	As the saying goes, "There's always room for improvement". But, with your site, Trisha, I'm kind of hard-pressed to see anything that would prevent you from having some measure of success with it. I think it's a fine effort. For me, "tours" are like art... their appeal is in the eye of the beholder. Your tour is professional looking and attractive in its design. There's no "turn off" factor at all in it for me. And, with solo girl type sites like yours, I've always found that surfers need to connect with you (the star of the site) and become infatuated fairly fast if there's a chance of closing the sale. I believe there's enough of you being revealed through your bio and sample pics and videos to make that kind of connection possible if the "chemistry" is there. Don't be afraid to really make it all about you. It's the "wow" factor that guys (and girls) are looking for... wish you the best with it!

2007-12-12, 03:47 PM	#8
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2007-12-12, 04:56 PM	#9
LD wtfwjd? Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 2,103	Damn good looking site if you ask me. __________________ Artisteer Wordpress Theme Generator Create Custom Themes! My Little Network