Yay or nay?

SwillMaker · 2011-01-10, 03:09 PM

Aight, I took a stab at it. Lemme know what you think.
http://www.weknowamateurs.com/niche/...temp1warn.html

Useless · 2011-01-10, 03:25 PM

In the upper half of this photo, is that her husband being sodomized in the other bed?

The site looks fine to me.

pc · 2011-01-10, 03:26 PM

Not bad, but you need to have 2257 info on your index page and also you are allowed to 3 outgoing link per each site, one of those links on index and main page may be a link to your hub. Index page that big banner on top is not clickable. Few design things might be worth fixing: main table width is 728 but on gallery pages is stretched because of the thumbnails. You might want to set table to be equal on all pages, also not all the thumbnails have the same height, so it looks weird. Overall it's not bad, my first fs were far worse

I've noticed that your recip table is empty, a lot of LL's are only for PARTNERS these days, a lot of LL's are simply dead and not active anymore, make some search on this board before you start submitting.

SwillMaker · 2011-01-10, 03:34 PM

lmfao warrior, i think you are right!
you're right pc. i thought about the 2257 but forgot to add it. thanks for the reminder.

SwillMaker · 2011-01-10, 08:19 PM

OK, I put some recips in the table and added the 2257 link. If any others would like to comment please do. If every one thinks it is cool then I go to bed happy but if it sucks or contains other noob-like qualities lemme know because I will probably submit it in the morning.
I am a bit concerned about the width. The thumbs are pushing the table a little beyond 800 pixles. I think next time I will go with 3 pics wide by four rows. That or run the thumbs through the batch editor again.
And just to be sure I have my termanology correct the enter page (or warning page) leads to the "index" page correct?
I tweeked the URL a bit so this is the updated page
http://www.weknowamateurs.com/niche/...warn01_10.html
Thanks again gang

LD · 2011-01-11, 08:19 AM

I would not use an exit link, and if I did I would not send the traffic to Google. Also, do you really want an exit link to be that prominent? You're going to get a lot of people exiting the site before they get to the next page...do you really want that?

As far as structure/overall design goes, I would have no problem lising it. I would encourage you to look at text style recips, though. Most reviewers have no problem with them, you can get more on a page, and they just look a hell of a lot better.

clarawood · 2011-01-11, 08:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SwillMaker

Aight, I took a stab at it. Lemme know what you think.
http://www.weknowamateurs.com/niche/...temp1warn.html

its very nice.. oh.... i like it.

davion · 2011-01-17, 07:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SwillMaker

Aight, I took a stab at it. Lemme know what you think.
http://www.weknowamateurs.com/niche/...temp1warn.html

It has error message. Please check the URL.

Quote:

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The requested URL /niche/wifebkt/freesite/temp1warn.html was not found on this server.

2011-01-10, 03:09 PM	#1
SwillMaker If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 30	Yay or nay? Aight, I took a stab at it. Lemme know what you think. http://www.weknowamateurs.com/niche/...temp1warn.html

2011-01-10, 03:25 PM	#2
Useless Certified Nice Person Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Dirty Undies, NY Posts: 11,268	In the upper half of this photo, is that her husband being sodomized in the other bed? The site looks fine to me. __________________ Click here to purchase a bridge I'm selling.

2011-01-11, 08:19 AM	#6
LD wtfwjd? Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 2,103	I would not use an exit link, and if I did I would not send the traffic to Google. Also, do you really want an exit link to be that prominent? You're going to get a lot of people exiting the site before they get to the next page...do you really want that? As far as structure/overall design goes, I would have no problem lising it. I would encourage you to look at text style recips, though. Most reviewers have no problem with them, you can get more on a page, and they just look a hell of a lot better. __________________ Artisteer Wordpress Theme Generator Create Custom Themes! My Little Network

2011-01-10, 03:26 PM	#3
pc Shift Out / X-On Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: unknown Posts: 2,298	Not bad, but you need to have 2257 info on your index page and also you are allowed to 3 outgoing link per each site, one of those links on index and main page may be a link to your hub. Index page that big banner on top is not clickable. Few design things might be worth fixing: main table width is 728 but on gallery pages is stretched because of the thumbnails. You might want to set table to be equal on all pages, also not all the thumbnails have the same height, so it looks weird. Overall it's not bad, my first fs were far worse I've noticed that your recip table is empty, a lot of LL's are only for PARTNERS these days, a lot of LL's are simply dead and not active anymore, make some search on this board before you start submitting.

2011-01-10, 03:34 PM	#4
SwillMaker If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 30	lmfao warrior, i think you are right! you're right pc. i thought about the 2257 but forgot to add it. thanks for the reminder.

2011-01-10, 08:19 PM	#5
SwillMaker If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 30	OK, I put some recips in the table and added the 2257 link. If any others would like to comment please do. If every one thinks it is cool then I go to bed happy but if it sucks or contains other noob-like qualities lemme know because I will probably submit it in the morning. I am a bit concerned about the width. The thumbs are pushing the table a little beyond 800 pixles. I think next time I will go with 3 pics wide by four rows. That or run the thumbs through the batch editor again. And just to be sure I have my termanology correct the enter page (or warning page) leads to the "index" page correct? I tweeked the URL a bit so this is the updated page http://www.weknowamateurs.com/niche/...warn01_10.html Thanks again gang