freesite descriptions - builders please take note.

bluebrit · 2009-03-24, 10:03 AM

Am I the only one who is sick of seeing free site descriptions that simply say " Some girl gets fucked by a big cock" or "Some girls face gets blasted with cum from a giant black cock" or "watch these girls getting fucked by huge cocks till they spurt cum everywhere"?

There is a guy involved somewhere in there, not just a pair of balls on a giant fucking cock that happens to bounce into the room fuck some girl and bounce out again!

How about being a little more descriptive and a little less concerned about getting your keywords out there. The whole idea of a description is to be accurate and your keywords in the description are fine but writing a good description is going to do you much more good than simply saying a cock fucked a girl till it came for fucks sake.

I can't be alone in the way I am thinking and I for one would like to see people pay a little more attention to the descriptions they use. It will be better for all of us if a well worded sentence that takes an extra minute of thought is used instead of the usual crap i have been seeing.

Maybe this could be a topic for OTB? Just a thought.

Ok rant over but fs builders, please take a little time in coming up with a half way decent description please.

papagmp · 2009-03-24, 10:07 AM

OK - next one will say "Thena gets fucked by Papa's big cock" - is that descriptive enough?????

anasporn · 2009-03-24, 10:23 AM

The way some of them guys look, better off only showing the cock ... or putting a paper bag over their faces!

Cleo · 2009-03-24, 11:40 AM

Cock wearing shorts bangs purple pussy

Sodo · 2009-03-24, 11:59 AM

hehehe

Greenguy · 2009-03-24, 01:22 PM

I just write my own when I review - problem solved

LD · 2009-03-24, 03:12 PM

"man with cock of horse fucks tight pussy..."

MeatPounder · 2009-03-24, 03:23 PM

No lusciousdelight, I got that one too but it read "man with cock of horse fuck pussy tight"

Cleo · 2009-03-24, 03:33 PM

Somewhere out there is a horse missing its cock.

papagmp · 2009-03-24, 11:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cleo

Somewhere out there is a horse missing its cock.

Nope - still got mine

SmithsMedia · 2009-03-26, 06:27 PM

I tired being 'different' but was declined loads, thing is I find quite a few LL rewrite them anyway which is I guess whats helps their pages remain more unique

Twiceshy · 2009-03-26, 11:23 PM

I have to agree with SmithsMedia in most cases the description is rewritten anyways so i do a basic descrpt of my site and let the LL owner/reviewer add/change it to thier likeing. But i do try to have a decent one just incase some use what i have added *shrugs* its a damned if you do damned if you dont kinda deal i think, its hard to please everyone.My out take is for the few LL i do submit to im gonna keep the bigger ones happiest and use their general rules as a guide line in all things not just descriptions.

2009-03-24, 10:03 AM	#1
bluebrit Along for the ride and loving it. Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 1,873	freesite descriptions - builders please take note. Am I the only one who is sick of seeing free site descriptions that simply say " Some girl gets fucked by a big cock" or "Some girls face gets blasted with cum from a giant black cock" or "watch these girls getting fucked by huge cocks till they spurt cum everywhere"? There is a guy involved somewhere in there, not just a pair of balls on a giant fucking cock that happens to bounce into the room fuck some girl and bounce out again! How about being a little more descriptive and a little less concerned about getting your keywords out there. The whole idea of a description is to be accurate and your keywords in the description are fine but writing a good description is going to do you much more good than simply saying a cock fucked a girl till it came for fucks sake. I can't be alone in the way I am thinking and I for one would like to see people pay a little more attention to the descriptions they use. It will be better for all of us if a well worded sentence that takes an extra minute of thought is used instead of the usual crap i have been seeing. Maybe this could be a topic for OTB? Just a thought. Ok rant over but fs builders, please take a little time in coming up with a half way decent description please.

2009-03-24, 10:07 AM	#2
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2009-03-24, 10:23 AM	#3
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2009-03-24, 03:33 PM	#9
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2009-03-26, 06:27 PM	#11
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2009-03-26, 11:23 PM	#12
Twiceshy You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 958	I have to agree with SmithsMedia in most cases the description is rewritten anyways so i do a basic descrpt of my site and let the LL owner/reviewer add/change it to thier likeing. But i do try to have a decent one just incase some use what i have added shrugs its a damned if you do damned if you dont kinda deal i think, its hard to please everyone.My out take is for the few LL i do submit to im gonna keep the bigger ones happiest and use their general rules as a guide line in all things not just descriptions.