Review required please

GriseyV2 · 2006-01-30, 01:27 PM

Hiya Guys,
I made this today http://www.bustybeccy.com/links/azw/index.php this will be for affiliates to use but i would like your view of what sucks about it and what can be done tobe made better . My icq is 204-611-741 incase someone wants to hit me up

RawAlex · 2006-01-30, 03:05 PM

Okay, the second gallery is missing, so no comment there.

4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong.

Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe.

Alex

Fonz · 2006-01-30, 03:52 PM

It's probably not a good idea to show her topless on the first gallery and completely clothed on the second gallery. It could be that the second gallery uses a different picture set but I'd use that one as gallery 1 and not gallery 2.

Also on the gallery pages the links to the sponsor didn't look very appealing to me, try to grab the surfer's attention a little more.

GriseyV2 · 2006-01-30, 07:16 PM

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Originally Posted by RawAlex

4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong.

Changed

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Originally Posted by RawAlex

Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe.

Alex

I put some more spaces on the main.php do you think the galleries could do with more spaces ?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fonz

It's probably not a good idea to show her topless on the first gallery and completely clothed on the second gallery. It could be that the second gallery uses a different picture set but I'd use that one as gallery 1 and not gallery 2.

Changed them around

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Originally Posted by Fonz

Also on the gallery pages the links to the sponsor didn't look very appealing to me, try to grab the surfer's attention a little more.

Is that any better ?

Thanks for checking it over guys would help helpful if you did again just to check the changes are better

Wayne

Beaver Bob · 2006-01-30, 09:38 PM

the picture linking to gallery 2 works, but the linking text 'Gallery 2' is missing the ? between .php and id

GriseyV2 · 2006-01-30, 11:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Beaver Bob

the picture linking to gallery 2 works, but the linking text 'Gallery 2' is missing the ? between .php and id

Thanks man, fixed

MrYum · 2006-01-30, 11:40 PM

Noticed the site scrolls a bit sideways at 800 wide. Other than the side scroll and you still have a couple pics at the end of the 2nd gallery that are out of sequence...it be lookin good

Oh, and she's a cutie too...hubba hubba

selena · 2006-02-01, 12:52 PM

2nd gallery pics are not in sequence.

Xeno · 2006-02-01, 01:27 PM

Looking good to me

I'd make the Gallery entry photos just a wee bit smaller (although that is just me), either way, I am sure it'll work for the surfer.

RawAlex · 2006-02-01, 02:27 PM

The spacing is better, the text links look better, but the images between the two galleries are out of sequence. Even a gallery of images is leading people towards click on to the site... build them from "clothed" to near naked / naked at the end... make them want to see more.

Alex

GriseyV2 · 2006-02-01, 04:57 PM

Regarding the pics of the 2 galleries they are 2 different sets some people said that would be better or should i just do 10 pics per gallery from the same set ?

Xeno · 2006-02-01, 05:21 PM

Either option should be fine...as long as (most LL will want this) the images are in sequence if they are from the same photo shoot (set) and together. If each gallery is from a different set on their own, that is fine too. The oother option (as I have seen) is each image is from a different set creating 10 different unique images per gallery.

GriseyV2 · 2006-02-01, 06:09 PM

O.k changed the 2 images around on gallery 2

2006-01-30, 01:27 PM	#1
GriseyV2 If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 32	Review required please Hiya Guys, I made this today http://www.bustybeccy.com/links/azw/index.php this will be for affiliates to use but i would like your view of what sucks about it and what can be done tobe made better . My icq is 204-611-741 incase someone wants to hit me up __________________ Wayne 240-611-741

2006-01-30, 03:52 PM	#3
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,929	It's probably not a good idea to show her topless on the first gallery and completely clothed on the second gallery. It could be that the second gallery uses a different picture set but I'd use that one as gallery 1 and not gallery 2. Also on the gallery pages the links to the sponsor didn't look very appealing to me, try to grab the surfer's attention a little more. __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2006-01-30, 09:38 PM	#5
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2006-01-30, 11:40 PM	#7
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2006-01-30, 03:05 PM	#2
RawAlex Took the hint. Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 5,597	Okay, the second gallery is missing, so no comment there. 4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong. Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe. Alex

2006-02-01, 01:27 PM	#9
Xeno Do you want the job done right, or do you want it done fast? Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 494	Looking good to me I'd make the Gallery entry photos just a wee bit smaller (although that is just me), either way, I am sure it'll work for the surfer. __________________ Why I never sleep anymore... Web Designing

2006-02-01, 02:27 PM	#10
RawAlex Took the hint. Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 5,597	The spacing is better, the text links look better, but the images between the two galleries are out of sequence. Even a gallery of images is leading people towards click on to the site... build them from "clothed" to near naked / naked at the end... make them want to see more. Alex

2006-02-01, 04:57 PM	#11
GriseyV2 If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 32	Regarding the pics of the 2 galleries they are 2 different sets some people said that would be better or should i just do 10 pics per gallery from the same set ? __________________ Wayne 240-611-741

2006-02-01, 05:21 PM	#12
Xeno Do you want the job done right, or do you want it done fast? Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 494	Either option should be fine...as long as (most LL will want this) the images are in sequence if they are from the same photo shoot (set) and together. If each gallery is from a different set on their own, that is fine too. The oother option (as I have seen) is each image is from a different set creating 10 different unique images per gallery. __________________ Why I never sleep anymore... Web Designing

2006-02-01, 06:09 PM	#13
GriseyV2 If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 32	O.k changed the 2 images around on gallery 2 __________________ Wayne 240-611-741