free sites [posting project]... please review/check out

[dreadbandit]

hello
i've just prepared 5 from 10 designs which will be used a month for a free sites posting project... so one design will be used for 3 single free sites in a current month.

|shocking|
getting to the heart of the matter... ->

here are the designs:
http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_...tremenaturals/
http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_of_2/2-primecups/
http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_of_2/3-tamedteens/
http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_...ghtybookworms/
http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_...tremenaturals/

--> recips, banners for tamedteens, and few other details will be added

Take a look at them and let me know what do you think about that, is there anything to correct, you've got any tips or advices? everything, including bashing is welcome!
thank you

[Preacher]

While it may not effect your chance of getting listing, most reviewers do not like huge chunks of linked text as seen here too much linked text

[Xeno]

These would probably get listed by many if not most, but on a sense of design, I really hate seeing peeps highlight full bodies of text. I would say at least go with an underline...lose the text (paragraph) background highlights.

[alessandro]

The layouts look nice, but as Preacher said don't use blocks of text as anchor texts. You'll get listed in many places with these templates ( of course, content is important too ) and you're also welcome to submit to my PornListed

[dreadbandit]

hello & thank you : ) i'll surely take care of those highlights... I already did in here:

http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_...tremenaturals/
http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_of_2/2-primecups/
http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_of_2/3-tamedteens/

will it be better this way?

going to get some sleep, take care

[alessandro]

Much better

[ynuahayt]

Yup pretty nice sites now - remember to put the keywords you're targeting in the Title tag of your sites for a better chance in the engines - and you only need 20 pictures to get listed so why give the surfer all that free content?

[Fonz]

That are some nice sites you have there. The only problem I see here is the use of nastydollars free content. Some LL's don't list sites using ND's free content.

Oh yeah, and you "Submit" free sites, you don't "Post" them

[ladydesigner]

Originally Posted by dreadbandit

http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_...tremenaturals/
http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_of_2/2-primecups/
http://www.exwifeclub.com/package-1_of_2/3-tamedteens/
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Those look good. I'd list them.

[dreadbandit]

hi...
nice to read all of those comments... : ) I had a pc crash & needed few days to recover all the stuff, i've changed few things and i've put ready sites on the ftp a minute ago. Are the titles/desc. all right?

title: Huge Naturals Show off
desc: Busty Tattoed Redhead Gives Titjob With Creamy Finish
url: http://www.exwifeclub.com/01-natural...off/index.html

title: Looking For Hard Love
desc: Two extremely busty babes taking the load on their tits!
url: http://www.exwifeclub.com/02-hard-love-tits/index.html

title: Horny, Eager & Absolutly Wet Margaret
desc: Fresh talent in black stockings gets some really intensive heavy fucking!
url: http://www.exwifeclub.com/03-horny-t...ret/index.html

One more question, please take a look at current version and let me know would it be better to divide the recips so instead of having sixteen recips on index.html there would be eight on index.html & eight on index.htm!

take a good care & have fun! |shocking|


ynuahayt: thank you for the se tip

fonz: thank you for info about nd, i'll talk with my client so he could consider change for next month designZ... i thought about that, maybe
PrimeCups will be converting better... thank you for eng tip [=; )-], still got a lot to improve & learn in that/this area - hehehe : )

ladydesigner: thank you very much... I'd submit them

[Linkster]

Also - since you kinda intimated a "team" - make sure no one else is submitting from the same team It will cause all of the team to get blacklisted

[dreadbandit]

Originally Posted by Linkster

Also - since you kinda intimated a "team" - make sure no one else is submitting from the same team It will cause all of the team to get blacklisted

Hello,
you're absolutly right... as i am independent designer i'm also getting paid for adv's/texts with nice ctr and in this, particular case i'm also getting paid for experience (or maybe luck, i'm in ab only for about 5 years, from which last year was a little inactive). The deal is that I have prepared everything and i did let know my client that it's ready, now i only need to give him a GO signal & that's the end of my job... for June Still need to create ten designs for July, I think those will be movie free sites. The truth is that I've been already paid for that job... also for next month <crazy>
and simply because of that I want to make sure that everything will go according to plan

From what I know the whole thing about "team-submitting" (or multi or something like that) won't be a problem. It can't be even problem, because it's against basic rules and this man is interested only in stable growth. In the same time thank you for mentioning this case 'cause I was thinking about it, especially that i've already done few sites for different ppl & i'll do few more. I also want to finish developing of my own projects.

Hope (& believe to provide great designing services as I improve my skills. My nearest reward for achieving goal is Wacom Intuos3... the size depends on results, so I've got plenty of motivation

it's 2:56 AM here so I'm going to get some sleep

[Sexvilly]

hadn't seen your sites with highlighted txt, but as far as linked paragraphs... there is an 'unspoken' rule of up 4 lines of linked txt is ok.
and linked txt does increase your Ctr - you never know which of the word will grab surfers' attention

[ronnie]

One thing I noticed is this site http://www.exwifeclub.com/02-hard-love-tits/index.html , it's very hard to read some of the text on a number of recips.

ronnie