Feedback on my new review site

BigVikingAl · 2008-02-12, 10:35 PM

Just created a new mini review site at MrPornReview-throat-gaggers

Check out the reviews. Are they too long. Should I make the font and graphics smaller? Any feedback would be nice.

hashbury · 2008-02-13, 12:24 AM

I think it looks good.
I would not make the font any smaller, If anything i would make it larger.
i like it

AndyS · 2008-02-13, 06:21 AM

Nicely categorized page that should work well but woooo they are big reviews, text is always good I just wonder how many people are going to read all of it.

If you do want reviews that big maybe bolding key points in the text would help break it up and allow people who just scan the page to get your sell points quickly.

You can do some writing for me anytime :-)

horney · 2008-02-13, 07:49 AM

I like it, too. Just one, relatively minor but important grammatical point. Like many people, I find grammatical errors a distraction. Like many other people, you have confused the plural and the possessive.

Within the first few words of the site, you have "lover's". Whose lovers? The apostrophe makes it possessive. It should be "lovers". There are more than one of them (you hope) and no possession should be implied.

LD · 2008-02-13, 09:39 AM

What horney and hasbury said...I do like the nice clean layout.

pc · 2008-02-13, 09:43 AM

I like Mr Porn Hero .He looks very good , maybe he should be more visible in different places on the site ( pointing something maybe )Just idea.

japamor · 2008-02-13, 10:00 AM

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Originally Posted by horney

I like it, too. Just one, relatively minor but important grammatical point. Like many people, I find grammatical errors a distraction. Like many other people, you have confused the plural and the possessive.

Within the first few words of the site, you have "lover's". Whose lovers? The apostrophe makes it possessive. It should be "lovers". There are more than one of them (you hope) and no possession should be implied.

Nice one horney. I too am fanatical about the apostrophe 's' when it denotes possession. It confuses many people. There is one great rule to remember: The apostrophe denotes ownership/possession. Put the apostrophe AFTER the owner/possessor.
Thus: one lover owns some wine: the lover's wine; but several lovers own some wine: the lovers' wine.

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Nice site by the way, BigVikingAl!

LD · 2008-02-13, 05:14 PM

I always get "its" and "it's" mixed up. And for some reason I've always used possessives when doing a plural of an letter abbreviations. For example, on "Mergers and Acquisistions", I would use "M&A's" until someone told me it was incorrect. If only I had known I would be doing porn back in my high school English class I would have probably paid better attention....

2008-02-12, 10:35 PM	#1
BigVikingAl They have the Internet on computers, now? Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 148	Feedback on my new review site Just created a new mini review site at MrPornReview-throat-gaggers Check out the reviews. Are they too long. Should I make the font and graphics smaller? Any feedback would be nice. __________________ MrPornReview/throat-gaggers In depth deepthroat site reviews

2008-02-13, 12:24 AM	#2
hashbury My name is hashbury not assburry Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Tampa Posts: 1,125	I think it looks good. I would not make the font any smaller, If anything i would make it larger. i like it __________________ Sig Goes Here!

2008-02-13, 06:21 AM	#3
AndyS They have the Internet on computers, now? Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 144	Nicely categorized page that should work well but woooo they are big reviews, text is always good I just wonder how many people are going to read all of it. If you do want reviews that big maybe bolding key points in the text would help break it up and allow people who just scan the page to get your sell points quickly. You can do some writing for me anytime :-) __________________ Get Oral Free Sites Traffic - http://www.1storal.com

2008-02-13, 09:39 AM	#5
LD wtfwjd? Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 2,103	What horney and hasbury said...I do like the nice clean layout. __________________ Artisteer Wordpress Theme Generator Create Custom Themes! My Little Network

2008-02-13, 09:43 AM	#6
pc Shift Out / X-On Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: unknown Posts: 2,298	Mr Porn Review I like Mr Porn Hero .He looks very good , maybe he should be more visible in different places on the site ( pointing something maybe )Just idea.

2008-02-13, 07:49 AM	#4
horney Shut up brain, or I'll stab you with a Q-tip! Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 111	I like it, too. Just one, relatively minor but important grammatical point. Like many people, I find grammatical errors a distraction. Like many other people, you have confused the plural and the possessive. Within the first few words of the site, you have "lover's". Whose lovers? The apostrophe makes it possessive. It should be "lovers". There are more than one of them (you hope) and no possession should be implied.

2008-02-13, 05:14 PM	#8
LD wtfwjd? Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 2,103	I always get "its" and "it's" mixed up. And for some reason I've always used possessives when doing a plural of an letter abbreviations. For example, on "Mergers and Acquisistions", I would use "M&A's" until someone told me it was incorrect. If only I had known I would be doing porn back in my high school English class I would have probably paid better attention.... __________________ Artisteer Wordpress Theme Generator Create Custom Themes! My Little Network