Please Critique...It's my first free site...

RingSide · 2003-11-28, 08:09 PM

I've been working on this since last weekend. It's my first site and I need some more feedback. Any suggestions from an experienced webmaster or two would be appreciated.

http://www.allteencafe.com/warning.html

Thanks!

Greenguy · 2003-11-28, 08:18 PM

Looks very nice to me

Cleo · 2003-11-28, 08:21 PM

Looks good to me too.

Be careful on using the word "young".

DangerDave · 2003-11-28, 09:42 PM

Looks good from down here.......

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dareutwo · 2003-11-30, 11:39 PM

Looks good from Up North

misty3k · 2003-12-01, 12:57 AM

It looks really nice! My only question--booty college on the page with the gauge gallery. Might not be the paysite a lot of your surfers who are attracted to gauge would go for.

other than that very minor thing---wow! I Like it!~

Jasun · 2003-12-01, 04:55 PM

Looks great. I'd maybe look at adding a bit more content, and not make it so easy to find your way back to the main page. If you keep giving links to the other galleries and the main page, people are less likely to click on a banner.

Very well done, though.

2003-11-28, 08:09 PM	#1
RingSide Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Chapel Hill, NC Posts: 2	Please Critique...It's my first free site... I've been working on this since last weekend. It's my first site and I need some more feedback. Any suggestions from an experienced webmaster or two would be appreciated. http://www.allteencafe.com/warning.html Thanks!

2003-11-28, 08:18 PM	#2
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,788	Looks very nice to me __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2003-11-28, 08:21 PM	#3
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2003-11-28, 09:42 PM	#4
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2003-11-30, 11:39 PM	#5
dareutwo You can't disprove anything with evidence that doesn't exist Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: NW Minnesota - pop 865 +/- 1 Posts: 2,038	Looks good from Up North __________________ This is me Mark's-Links

2003-12-01, 12:57 AM	#6
misty3k If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Hollywood, CA Posts: 38	It looks really nice! My only question--booty college on the page with the gauge gallery. Might not be the paysite a lot of your surfers who are attracted to gauge would go for. other than that very minor thing---wow! I Like it!~ __________________ Misty3k why are my tits sunburnt?

2003-12-01, 04:55 PM	#7
Jasun Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 14	Looks great. I'd maybe look at adding a bit more content, and not make it so easy to find your way back to the main page. If you keep giving links to the other galleries and the main page, people are less likely to click on a banner. Very well done, though. __________________ Please Re-Read The Rules For Sig Files