New Review

Star Man · 2006-04-13, 02:02 PM

Hey! Took a few days rest from rotting in front of my pc but once again ROT FACTOR is in full effect.Anyway,I started a new Kelli Young site last nite but instead of just ripping off the layout of the actual site and making my own piss poor watered down version like I normaly do,I tried to give it a unique look that I just kind of made up.I was checking out some free sites yesterday and saw a lot of SUPER good work done by other webmasters and was inspired.So basicly what I'm saying is,this kind of a concept free site.It may look ok or it might be the worste site by me so far.My eyes get so bad from my monitor after a certin period of time that I can't tell what looks good or bad sometimes.

On the warning page I had a extra outgoing link to play with so I just did this retarded thing with the fleshlight for the hell of it.If it looks dumb Ill take it down.As usual,all suggestions for improvment even if its not means for decline are much welcomed!

http://www.dickheadshit.com/perfectteenkelli/index.html

Fonz · 2006-04-14, 04:00 AM

Ok, there are 2 things I noticed.

1. My recip isn't on that site, many LLs will reject you for that

2. It appears she gets half naked in the first gallery and is completely dressed to get half naked again in the second gallery. You should try to continue in the second set what you ended with in the first, if you know what I mean

Added: other than that the site looks really good

Star Man · 2006-04-14, 06:28 AM

Thanks man

Yeah I totaly agree about the content layout but thats basicly what I had to work with.Her content is weak.I was thinking of mixing it up a bit but I thought it would look way to obvious
that it was from 2 different sets.As for the first observation,consider it done!I Don't want to deal with all those rejection emails.

Fonz · 2006-04-14, 07:49 AM

I noticed you submitted that site to my little pet LL TeenSpanker.com, thanks for that

Just a few things.
The majority of LL's likes it when you only use 3-4 words for your title, put the same title you use on your index page in de form's Title field. And you might want to keep your description somewhere around 10 words or so.
Just thought I should mention this

Star Man · 2006-04-14, 09:16 AM

Check your Partner mail when you get a chance.

MrYum · 2006-04-14, 10:06 AM

Looks good Star Man

Got your message too...no worries

Watch that Fonz guy...those leather wearing biker types are all trouble makers

Fonz · 2006-04-14, 10:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Star Man

Check your Partner mail when you get a chance.

I replied and expect a reply back so I can send you the final reply

MrYum confuses me with someone else, I like to wear pink and listen to Boy George and Village peolpe

2006-04-13, 02:02 PM	#1
Star Man A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: clevel.......don't make me say it! Posts: 436	New Review Hey! Took a few days rest from rotting in front of my pc but once again ROT FACTOR is in full effect.Anyway,I started a new Kelli Young site last nite but instead of just ripping off the layout of the actual site and making my own piss poor watered down version like I normaly do,I tried to give it a unique look that I just kind of made up.I was checking out some free sites yesterday and saw a lot of SUPER good work done by other webmasters and was inspired.So basicly what I'm saying is,this kind of a concept free site.It may look ok or it might be the worste site by me so far.My eyes get so bad from my monitor after a certin period of time that I can't tell what looks good or bad sometimes. On the warning page I had a extra outgoing link to play with so I just did this retarded thing with the fleshlight for the hell of it.If it looks dumb Ill take it down.As usual,all suggestions for improvment even if its not means for decline are much welcomed! http://www.dickheadshit.com/perfectteenkelli/index.html

2006-04-14, 04:00 AM	#2
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,929	Ok, there are 2 things I noticed. 1. My recip isn't on that site, many LLs will reject you for that 2. It appears she gets half naked in the first gallery and is completely dressed to get half naked again in the second gallery. You should try to continue in the second set what you ended with in the first, if you know what I mean Added: other than that the site looks really good __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog Last edited by Fonz; 2006-04-14 at 04:04 AM..

2006-04-14, 07:49 AM	#4
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,929	I noticed you submitted that site to my little pet LL TeenSpanker.com, thanks for that Just a few things. The majority of LL's likes it when you only use 3-4 words for your title, put the same title you use on your index page in de form's Title field. And you might want to keep your description somewhere around 10 words or so. Just thought I should mention this __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2006-04-14, 10:06 AM	#6
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Looks good Star Man Got your message too...no worries Watch that Fonz guy...those leather wearing biker types are all trouble makers __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-04-14, 06:28 AM	#3
Star Man A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: clevel.......don't make me say it! Posts: 436	Thanks man Yeah I totaly agree about the content layout but thats basicly what I had to work with.Her content is weak.I was thinking of mixing it up a bit but I thought it would look way to obvious that it was from 2 different sets.As for the first observation,consider it done!I Don't want to deal with all those rejection emails.

2006-04-14, 09:16 AM	#5
Star Man A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: clevel.......don't make me say it! Posts: 436	Check your Partner mail when you get a chance.