Free site review, please...

Dagwolf · 2004-10-06, 04:31 AM

Ok, I haven't built any free sites for a while... Tell me how I'm doing. Does this fit the general submission rules (other than the lack of reciprocals?)

http://shagcity.com/free/cootercleavage1/

Greenguy · 2004-10-06, 07:11 AM

1st page is left aligned, 2nd page is centered, galleries are left aligned.

The default font style & size makes the pages look sorta blah.

Ramster · 2004-10-06, 10:02 AM

Looks kind of plain but not bad.

Center align All pages. Make the gallery links easier to find to get listed. You are missing a picture in gallery 2.

RawAlex · 2004-10-06, 10:43 AM

I am not a big fan of hiding the gallery links inside a bunch of text. Your gallery links should be much more clear.

You certainly need to work on fonts and stuff as well, you can really add some zing to the site with the right looking fonts and colors.

Red and dark blue are the two hardest colors to get to show properly on a monitor. Avoid them for any important text.

:-)

Alex

Dagwolf · 2004-10-06, 01:32 PM

Ok, I resized the text, changed the text color and font, and fixed the broken image link.

How does it look now?

Edit: I also realigned all the pages and made the gallery links more visible... although I'd much rather have the surfer read the text before going on to the free galleries. :p

Greenguy · 2004-10-06, 04:15 PM

Looks alot better now

2004-10-06, 04:31 AM	#1
Dagwolf They have the Internet on computers, now? Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: British Columbia Posts: 146	Free site review, please... Ok, I haven't built any free sites for a while... Tell me how I'm doing. Does this fit the general submission rules (other than the lack of reciprocals?) http://shagcity.com/free/cootercleavage1/ __________________ Hey, what did I do this time?

2004-10-06, 07:11 AM	#2
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,766	1st page is left aligned, 2nd page is centered, galleries are left aligned. The default font style & size makes the pages look sorta blah. __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2004-10-06, 10:02 AM	#3
Ramster Life is good Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Ottawa, Canada Posts: 11,685	Looks kind of plain but not bad. Center align All pages. Make the gallery links easier to find to get listed. You are missing a picture in gallery 2. __________________ Pornstar Legends \| Live Cam Model Shows \| Hungarian Girls Skype: robmurray999

2004-10-06, 01:32 PM	#5
Dagwolf They have the Internet on computers, now? Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: British Columbia Posts: 146	Ok, I resized the text, changed the text color and font, and fixed the broken image link. How does it look now? Edit: I also realigned all the pages and made the gallery links more visible... although I'd much rather have the surfer read the text before going on to the free galleries. :p __________________ Hey, what did I do this time? Last edited by Dagwolf; 2004-10-06 at 01:37 PM..

2004-10-06, 04:15 PM	#6
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,766	Looks alot better now __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2004-10-06, 10:43 AM	#4
RawAlex Took the hint. Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 5,597	I am not a big fan of hiding the gallery links inside a bunch of text. Your gallery links should be much more clear. You certainly need to work on fonts and stuff as well, you can really add some zing to the site with the right looking fonts and colors. Red and dark blue are the two hardest colors to get to show properly on a monitor. Avoid them for any important text. :-) Alex