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Old 2008-10-04, 01:18 AM   #1
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My first blog. Any tips?

I just set up my first blog. It's a simple teen blog. Doesn't have alot of content but I'm working on it. I place some banners here and there, some content and have some trades going on. Set up is not completely finished. I might change some banner spots, add more link categories, thumbs in the side bars, etc...

I know the design is very simple. I will change the header to make it more appealing.

I'd like to know what you guys think of it and what I should add/change to it

www.sexcravedteenies.com


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Old 2008-10-04, 07:42 AM   #2
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Layout looks very good, but that Fling IM thing is really annoying imo.
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Old 2008-10-04, 05:51 PM   #3
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I thought the chances of getting more input would be improved here so I moved you.

Keep working on it. The basics are there.
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The blog looks simple but neat in my opinion. There are potentials but the Fling IM popping every few seconds is rather annoying. If you can limit it to once when opening your site only, that'd be better honestly! Afterwards, just let it pop like every minute.
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Old 2008-10-04, 08:40 PM   #5
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Thanks for the tips. I'll set for once every minute. Didn't really check out how many times it showed when I put the coed in. But you guys are right, it is rather anoying
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Do you have to leave the links for Max Banner Ads up there? If so, I'd find another way of displaying banners. For me, that would be unacceptably intrusive.

You have three competing banners, all above the fold and all immediately adjacent to one another on every page view. It seems like overkill, very banner farm-ish. Spread them out.

Your posts could use some more text. They're very, very brief. Blogs don't gain SE traffic just because they're using a blogging platform. You need text content.

The name/domain is grammatically incorrect, by the way.
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Old 2008-10-05, 05:11 PM   #7
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Do you have to leave the links for Max Banner Ads up there? If so, I'd find another way of displaying banners. For me, that would be unacceptably intrusive.

You have three competing banners, all above the fold and all immediately adjacent to one another on every page view. It seems like overkill, very banner farm-ish. Spread them out.

Your posts could use some more text. They're very, very brief. Blogs don't gain SE traffic just because they're using a blogging platform. You need text content.

The name/domain is grammatically incorrect, by the way.
I'm playing around with that max banner pluggin. the free version has the link under the banners and the paid one doesn't.

I'll try to make longer texts. Thanks for the tip.

As for the name/domain, how is it grammatically incorrect?
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As for the name/domain, how is it grammatically incorrect?
'Craved' is past tense. It should be sex craving teenies. In its current form, it's sort of saying that the teens had craved sex, but no longer do.
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'Craved' is past tense. It should be sex craving teenies. In its current form, it's sort of saying that the teens had craved sex, but no longer do.
I think the name is fine and sounds much better than sexcravingteens.com
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Old 2008-10-05, 05:26 PM   #10
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Well, I thought the name sounded nice and it has "sex" and "teenies" in it.

Sex craved seems to be a widely used expression
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Sex craved seems to be a widely used expression
That doesn't make it grammatically correct. I'd bet it's so widely used because it sounds like 'sex crazed' and, generally speaking, people are idiots. Sex crazed makes sense. Sex craved does not.

I'm not telling you to dump the name, I'm just saying that things like that trip me up. It's not going to hurt your business to have me sitting hear wondering why those teens no longer crave sex whenever I see the domain.
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Old 2008-10-06, 12:23 AM   #12
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I would shoot for making your entries 4 to 6 sentences (longer if you can). Otherwise it looks nice and clean.
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I think its a good looking blog...and agree that your posts should be a bit longer. And as far as the name...do what works for you, although it is grammatically incorrect. But it could be pused as because of the action in each post that they were cravng sex, but since have fulfilled the need for it. Bottom line is dont worry about the small stuff, work on the post lengths and keep the quality coming.
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Old 2008-10-06, 06:02 PM   #14
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I agree with adding some more text, otherwise the layout is great.
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Old 2008-10-06, 09:59 PM   #15
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I'd redesign the header first and also put some text there.. Also, you need more meta tags.
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Old 2008-10-07, 04:38 AM   #16
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You definitely need more text. Just a slight little nitpick here, but you should consider centering your banners in the sidebars. You can do that by using the following syntax <center>banner html here<center/>. I just think it looks better that way, but it's personal preference of course. Fling.com is WAY over promoted. You could utilize that space better by pushing another sponsor in my opinion.
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Old 2008-10-07, 07:30 AM   #17
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...you should consider centering your banners in the sidebars. You can do that by using the following syntax <center>banner html here<center/>.
Since most blog templates are coded in xhtml you may want to read the pages below. The <center> tag has been deprecated since html 4.01 and isn't something you want to use if you want your site to validate as having well-coded pages.

You need to use a <div> tag with CSS code to center.

http://www.w3schools.com/TAGS/tag_center.asp
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Since most blog templates are coded in xhtml you may want to read the pages below. The <center> tag has been deprecated since html 4.01 and isn't something you want to use if you want your site to validate as having well-coded pages.

You need to use a <div> tag with CSS code to center.

http://www.w3schools.com/TAGS/tag_center.asp
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Seems to work just fine on my blogs and renders properly in IE and FF
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Old 2008-10-07, 11:35 AM   #19
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Thanks for all the tips
I'm using a text widget for the side bar banners. tried centering them but it didn't work. Maybe I did it wrong.As for fling, you guys are right, way over used. Wich do you guys suggest? AFF ? Neon Dollars?
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Old 2008-10-07, 01:12 PM   #20
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Seems to work just fine on my blogs and renders properly in IE and FF
Yes, using the old-style CENTER tags may "work" (a lot of things 'work') but it doesn't validate unless you're using an older DOCTYPE, pre HTML 4.01. Actually I think on some strict doctypes it won't even work, but you can get by on the transitional ones. If you don't care if your pages validate to your doctype, and if don't believe it has any effect on anything today and won't hurt you in the future, then you certainly should do whatever works for you.




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Yes, using the old-style CENTER tags may "work" (a lot of things 'work') but it doesn't validate unless you're using an older DOCTYPE, pre HTML 4.01. Actually I think on some strict doctypes it won't even work, but you can get by on the transitional ones. If you don't care if your pages validate to your doctype, and if don't believe it has any effect on anything today and won't hurt you in the future, then you certainly should do whatever works for you.
It's not that I'm disagreeing with you or saying that my way is better. It's just that you're speaking Greek to me. I get that the code is outdated. I'm just not sure what you mean by validating it. I'll give that code you showed me a try. I could use some more practice with CSS anyways. You'll have to excuse my noobness. The infantry didn't exactly prepare me for all the nuances of blogging.

@Useless Warrior - There's nothing wrong with trying to help people, but since when does helping people include being a self righteous asshole? In this thread you posted one constructive piece of advice followed by five posts of you being a douchebag. This isn't the first post I've seen it in either. I'm guessing the comment "I'm not allowed to reply to this in the manner to which I am accustomed" is in reference to one of the moderators telling you that you have a big mouth and you need to cool it. Shocking...
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Old 2009-01-02, 03:35 PM   #22
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Sexcravedteenies.com got PR1
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Here's how you can validate your pages.

Just enter the url of one of your html pages here...
http://validator.w3.org/

And you can validate your CSS here...
http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/

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No fighting guys!! lol
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Old 2008-10-07, 04:42 PM   #25
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Great first blog. Having a nice design and even some unique text puts you ahead of the zillions of splash-blogs out there, the kind I find all the time that put up four crappy posts 14 months ago and now wants a link trade with you.

Anyway, in addition to what's been stated, it would be good to have your title somewhere in text so you could use <h1> tags, and have a catchphrase you can use under it with <h2> tags for more juice.

Using keywords in your post titles is smart. Many do not do this.

Add a tag cloud to the sidebar.

Submit it to blog directories for a shot of traffic. http://www.adultblogresource.com/submitter/ is good to start.

teenieswhowerecravingsexbutnotanymore.com is available.
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