Critique my first site?

[garett]

Hi I'm new to the boards.

I've been doing TGP galleries for a long time but just recently decided to venture into free sites.

I was wondering if some link list owners would be kind enough to take a look at my first site and critique it for me. I submitted this to about 20 link lists the other day and it seems most have decided not to list it.

I did have one webmaster tell me that she did not list due to it being non-nude. But I'm wondering if there's anything else that's really obvious that I'm missing and should watch out for.

http://www.adult-porn-list.com/free/...01/index1.html

Another thing .. I used different pages to recip different link lists since I can't put 20 recips on a single page. It is common practice for galleries, but is it generally an issue for link list owners ? I wasn't sure if that would be considered a "doorway page" or not.

Thanks