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Old 2007-09-19, 09:22 PM   #2
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Originally Posted by balls_deep View Post
hey everyone, I don't post here often but since i'm submitting quite a few freesites lately i figured this is the place i should look for advise.

I think this is my best freesite to date, please advise me as to how to improve, what is wrong, and anything else you can tear apart about my site.

http://wildncrazycams.com/freesites/...ians/index.htm

thanks in advance.
Hey there Balls

Well, let me start off by saying the site is completely acceptable as is

But, since you asked for a 'tear apart'...lemme put on my xtra critical hat

The font color doesn't exactly pop off the page...it's far too close to the bg color. That said, please don't go to the other extreme and use overly contrasting colors that cause pain either...I see way too much of that. However, you DO want the text to be easily legible and kind of jump off the page...especially promo text.

Your google results ( site:domain.com search)...looks a little bit spammy because you've got the exact same titles and descriptions on some of your hub pages. While this in and of itself probably won't get your free sites declined, it can't be doing your serps any good in the long term.

Lastly, all the alt tags on your gallery images are the same. Again, probably isn't going to get free sites declined, but for sure isn't doing you any good in the engines either. Try to always build unique pages...similar in theme, but always unique

But again as stated in the beginning...I'd list it as is
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