As far as content alone is concerned,I like what you did on the second site in the first gallery.You threw in a few soft teasers to start things off and then jumped right into the action!The trick is not to get carried away with the soft teaser stuff like you did on the first site.
A good rule of thumb I got from
GG - make sure that at least half of the content on every page you build matches your sites title and whatever niche your building for.For example,If I build a cumshot site with 12 pics on a page,I make sure that at least 6 of them are cumshot photos.I find that doing this keeps me from slipping into the soft/hard mix zone and also just makes for a better site with solid content.