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Originally Posted by leXBro
i resubmit and get rejected reason:
Poor Grammar or Spelling Errors
why?
where mistakes I do not understand?
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Since I am such a nice guy tonight ;-)
Try "cuties look shy to everyone but get nasty for the camera!"
"beauties"...not "buties"
I'm really not sure what "become that camera" is supposed to mean...
"breasts"...not "brests"
I'm really not sure what "stop standing behind their backs" is supposed
to mean...
try "showing their bodies" instead of "show body"