Feedback On My First Free Site Please

[DonX]

I would like some feedback please on one of my first free sites please.
http://www.donsnaughtymodels.com/free/site_1/_3/1.html
Please be gentle, LOL
Thanks, and Peace,
DonX |rasta|

[Greenguy]

Let me guess - you designed this on a monitor that 1024 wide, right? If so, take a look at the site at 800 wide (which is what most surfers use)

Also, the text on the galleries might be a bit too much, at least for the top - maybe have 1 paragraph on top, one in the middle of the pics & one on the bottom?

[soggy]

http://www.donsnaughtymodels.com/free/site_1/_3/2.html

Not sure if some might consider the picture on the left a blind link or not. Might get you declined.

soggy

[RawAlex]

Where to start?

There is no site title on any of these pages. Your free sites should always have a title, and that title should appear on all of the pages. That is the title you are going to submit to the link sites.

The pages are all too wide. Reset your monitor to 800X600 and try again.

The galleries have (1) too many pictures, and (2) those pictures are not clearly related. Gallery 1 have some pictures with a red background, and then suddenly 2/3 of the way down there is a totally different photoset. The red pictures by themselves were enough images for a gallery (try to stay between 10 and 15 pictures per gallery, 2 gallerys for a total of 20-30 images per free site).

Spacing between the thumbs is way too large.

Way too much linked text on the gallery pages... Three paragraphs of underlined text is a bit more. Considering linking SOME of it, and using different fonts to make it clearer. Possibly split the text up and put it between the rows of thumbs.

Did you know it may be illegal to sell used panties in the US? :-)

Alex

[Monkey Spanker]

Originally posted by RawAlex
Did you know it may be illegal to sell used panties in the US? :-)

You gotta be shitting me? I know some people who have garage sales that need to be locked up then!

If anybody is in the market for some of my old boxers, I will make you a sweet deal!