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Tobbe
2004-05-17, 04:10 PM
So what do you think about my work !?. :)

http://www.pornww.com/freepornsites/melonhunter/7/index.html


bad stuff and good stuff!
out with it peeps! |waves|
AdultDesigners
2004-05-17, 05:00 PM
You can hire us to make a better design for your site |rasta|
Tobbe
2004-05-17, 05:09 PM
Originally posted by AdultDesigners
You can hire us to make a better design for your site |rasta| other then that |rasta|

welcum aboard by the way! |waves|
urb
2004-05-17, 05:11 PM
Originally posted by AdultDesigners
You can hire us to make a better design for your site |rasta|

That's a really helpful first post then.
Fonz
2004-05-17, 05:46 PM
That site looks nice and clean to me, you might want to add some catchy sales text to it....

Oh yeah, I rejected your last submission because that template was submitted 4-5 times in the last few days, sorry :)
urb
2004-05-17, 05:58 PM
See, that question was best answered by a link list owner. :)

Ya don't need photoshop to add catchy text.
Greenguy
2004-05-17, 06:18 PM
The overall design of the site looks fine - you could probably even do a little more advertising on the main page (it looks sorta empty)
Bill
2004-05-17, 06:27 PM
Your selling is way too passive. I can't see a single reason why someone should buy off your site.

Other than that it's fine, as long as you don't turn it into a repetitive template. It will at least get accepted most places, based on a quick overview.

But it's if anything too LL-friendly. Why throw away the sales potential you are allowed to use?
Tobbe
2004-05-17, 06:53 PM
Originally posted by Fonz
That site looks nice and clean to me, you might want to add some catchy sales text to it....

Oh yeah, I rejected your last submission because that template was submitted 4-5 times in the last few days, sorry :)

No problem dude i have been working on a few other designs now so ;)
Tobbe
2004-05-17, 06:57 PM
Thanks for all the tips guys i will try to add some more links and tell more about the sites i promote! |shake|

|waves|
dareutwo
2004-05-17, 07:32 PM
This was listed on Jays today - :)
I did change the category though -

I guess I'm a bit late to critic though.. LOL
Tobbe
2004-05-18, 10:51 AM
Originally posted by dareutwo
This was listed on Jays today - :)
I did change the category though -

I guess I'm a bit late to critic though.. LOL

No you can never be to late what can i do to improve ?! |rasta|