Is my blog writing spammy?

[Mr Kingwood]

Just looking a little constructive criticism. Please read a blog post or two a tell me if you think it is spammy or WTF is wrong with it.

My blog is called Plump BBW Porn Blog (http://plumpbbwporn.com/blog)

[ArtWilliams]

It is a little heavy on the keywords which makes it not terribly interesting to read. The Times Roman font and no pics makes it boring to look at. Your SEO might get surfers to the site but I don't know if they'd stay for long. The spelling and grammar is good!

[Simon]

If you're making lots of sales that way you can feel free to ignore this, but I agree with Art that it's not only keyword heavy (you have the word 'plumper' used over 40 times on that one page, plus the word 'plump' over 50 times... which means over 90 times when you add in the word plumper which already contains the word plump), it's also the kind of text that would be more likely to drive surfers away than to keep them around or give them a reason to bookmark or share your site or subscribe to your blog's rss feeds.

IMHO

[ArtWilliams]

If you're making lots of sales that way you can feel free to ignore this, but I agree with Art that it's not only keyword heavy (you have the word 'plumper' used over 40 times on that one page, plus the word 'plump' over 50 times... which means over 90 times when you add in the word plumper which already contains the word plump), it's also the kind of text that would be more likely to drive surfers away than to keep them around or give them a reason to bookmark or share your site or subscribe to your blog's rss feeds.

IMHO

Good point Simon. If you're getting sales then tell me to "fuck off"! |jester|

[Mr Kingwood]

Thanks I didn't know wordpress was dropping my pics. As for the comments. I am not doing well at all and thought I might be fucking up and you guys just confirmed.
first I gotta fix the picture problem! Then move on to a less spammy style of posting.

[Mr Kingwood]

I changed my blogging style to try and improve my keyword density. Here is an earlier post when i used to write a little more. What do you think about this (http://plumpbbwporn.com/blog/plump_bbw/platinum-blonde-chubby-in-fishnet-stocking-fulfills-her-man%e2%80%98s-madonna-fuck-fantasy/). Is this dense enough?

[Max@PuZcash.com]

I think it's ok...

[walrus]

I changed my blogging style to try and improve my keyword density. Here is an earlier post when i used to write a little more. What do you think about this (http://plumpbbwporn.com/blog/plump_bbw/platinum-blonde-chubby-in-fishnet-stocking-fulfills-her-man%e2%80%98s-madonna-fuck-fantasy/). Is this dense enough?

Quit worrying about keyword density. Mention your main keyword a couple time, bold it and you'll be fine. What you've got now probably looks spammy to the SE's and is hard to read for your visitors.

[ArtWilliams]

I changed my blogging style to try and improve my keyword density. Here is an earlier post when i used to write a little more. What do you think about this (http://plumpbbwporn.com/blog/plump_bbw/platinum-blonde-chubby-in-fishnet-stocking-fulfills-her-man%e2%80%98s-madonna-fuck-fantasy/). Is this dense enough?

You want people to come back again and again. Hopefully buy something. In the end, it is all about writing content people want to read.

[Mr Kingwood]

Thanks you guys!