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bluebrit
2009-03-24, 11:03 AM
Am I the only one who is sick of seeing free site descriptions that simply say " Some girl gets fucked by a big cock" or "Some girls face gets blasted with cum from a giant black cock" or "watch these girls getting fucked by huge cocks till they spurt cum everywhere"?

There is a guy involved somewhere in there, not just a pair of balls on a giant fucking cock that happens to bounce into the room fuck some girl and bounce out again!

How about being a little more descriptive and a little less concerned about getting your keywords out there. The whole idea of a description is to be accurate and your keywords in the description are fine but writing a good description is going to do you much more good than simply saying a cock fucked a girl till it came for fucks sake.

I can't be alone in the way I am thinking and I for one would like to see people pay a little more attention to the descriptions they use. It will be better for all of us if a well worded sentence that takes an extra minute of thought is used instead of the usual crap i have been seeing.

Maybe this could be a topic for OTB? Just a thought.

Ok rant over but fs builders, please take a little time in coming up with a half way decent description please.

papagmp
2009-03-24, 11:07 AM
OK - next one will say "Thena gets fucked by Papa's big cock" - is that descriptive enough????? |couch|

anasporn
2009-03-24, 11:23 AM
The way some of them guys look, better off only showing the cock ... or putting a paper bag over their faces!
|couch|

Cleo
2009-03-24, 12:40 PM
Cock wearing shorts bangs purple pussy

Sodo
2009-03-24, 12:59 PM
hehehe

Greenguy
2009-03-24, 02:22 PM
I just write my own when I review - problem solved :)

LD
2009-03-24, 04:12 PM
"man with cock of horse fucks tight pussy..." :D

MeatPounder
2009-03-24, 04:23 PM
No lusciousdelight, I got that one too but it read "man with cock of horse fuck pussy tight" ;)

Cleo
2009-03-24, 04:33 PM
Somewhere out there is a horse missing its cock.

papagmp
2009-03-25, 12:38 AM
Somewhere out there is a horse missing its cock.

Nope - still got mine |jester|

SmithsMedia
2009-03-26, 07:27 PM
I tired being 'different' but was declined loads, thing is I find quite a few LL rewrite them anyway which is I guess whats helps their pages remain more unique

Twiceshy
2009-03-27, 12:23 AM
I have to agree with SmithsMedia in most cases the description is rewritten anyways so i do a basic descrpt of my site and let the LL owner/reviewer add/change it to thier likeing. But i do try to have a decent one just incase some use what i have added *shrugs* its a damned if you do damned if you dont kinda deal i think, its hard to please everyone.My out take is for the few LL i do submit to im gonna keep the bigger ones happiest and use their general rules as a guide line in all things not just descriptions.