Free site review please :)

[Jel]

Hi all,

I'm after a free site critique for:

http://www.cfnmparty.co.uk/extremecfnmbacheloretteparties/

Any and all criticisms welcomed.

Many thanks,

Jel :)

[Greenguy]

I think the layout is fine, but the color scheme is a bit scattered - having the many different color texts as well as some pics on a white background & some on a black background make the site less appealing to the eye.

[DangerDave]

I see a number of problems including.

- over compressed poor quality video caps
- title on page linked to sponsor
- main page is a FPA


DD

[soggy]

That "click here for free samples" link appears a little blind!

[MrMaryLou]

The vid caps kill it for me :(

[Jel]

Hi all,
Many thanks for your time and views :)

Jel

[Fonz]

Hi cfnmparty :)

Like I told you in an email earlier, you have 4-5 links to outside pages on every page, try to cut down on them a little :)