Assess my freesite, pls

[akacayman]

Hi, guys.

I'm owner of http://www.hentai-porn-gallery.com/ domain (blog on the main is currently developing)

I've already submitted 17 freesites, but there were some mistakes. Also there were week's-long problems with my hosting, and my site was down. Now i've improved my imagination about freesites, moved to a good one hosting and it seems that my freesites are better :)

The last one is: http://hentai-porn-gallery.com/wet-hentai-porn/17-young-hentai-girls-clips/index.html

So i'd like to ask you assess it and to point on mistakes. If you have banned it - please point on the reasons, pls and i'll create new ones in order to your advises.


Thx a lot.

[Cleo]

Your text reads "young girls"

Didn't look past that.

[Sven800]

Needs to be at least teens, or it falls under Ch1ld/Underage which is a big NO-NO

[cbgirl]

What age group do you mean by young?
Im not clicking through unless they are late, late teens

[akacayman]

Needs to be at least teens, or it falls under Ch1ld/Underage which is a big NO-NO

thx, the next time they will be teens :D

[SheepGuy]

thx, the next time they will be teens :D

LOL! You'll also need photo ID, like a passport or driver's license, and signed model agreements.
Providing these toons are of legal age of course, and no depictions of Mohammed are involved.

[Tobbe]

I checked your .com url and the first thing i see is : Hentai porn action: fuck your mother in law! Great Henai rape scene!

[ronnie]

Sure it has nothing to do with your fine grasp of the English language.

[akacayman]

Sure it has nothing to do with your fine grasp of the English language.

studying :)

[Sven800]

What age group do you mean by young?
Im not clicking through unless they are late, late teens

Looks like standard hentai content - hard to tell age with drawings.



Also: Both your Galleries link to Gallery 1 - they should link to 1 & 2

[Tekster]

words like y---g and r--e, will get you nowhere.

[cbgirl]

K the site has since changed since I last clicked.
Looks a lot better, the girls don't look young like I was thinking, they have huge boobs! So thats all good |boobies|

[JohnnyR]

they have huge boobs! So thats all good |boobies|
:D */insert comment about cbgirl's sexy boobs here/* (what I'm thinking cannot be posted on this board - it's just... NSFW lol)

akacayman I'll leave out the "young" part on your (root) domain (I'll be young till I die |headbang|) but you STILL have rape twice in your sub-title. Now if you didn't get that before that's a BIG NO-NO! People have warned you about it and you chose not to listen, and soon you might wake up to find people around here aren't very friendly anymore! So GO TAKE THAT SHIT DOWN.

EDIT: OOOO yeah, I forgot what I initially wanted to say is that you also have "videos with popups redirects" there. WTF??? |crazy|

My advice to you would be to not just copy shit mindlessly from other places, or at least READ wtf it is that you put on your pages

[akacayman]

2 JohnnyR thx, fixed

sorry, i haven't paid more attention to blog, because now i'm only teaching how to work with wp.


i just wanted to put something on the main. but i can sure you, that i'll make it very pretty one in a soon time.

[akacayman]

I've greatly improved my freesite! Most of mistakes were accounted and corrected

here we go: http://www.hentai-porn-gallery.com/1tentaclegirls/24-tentacle-hentai-girls/

Lemmy, now let me post into your lls ;). All will be in the best level.

In a few days i'll improve my blog on the main page (hmm... what does it mean improve? i'll fully redo it).

[Fonz]

Your gallery might still get declined at some bigger LL's because of the poor English used on it.

[akacayman]

thx
sure i'll pay more attention for my english, but now there're a lot to teach

i'm starting fully new biz for me.

but english is very important for me and i'll improve it

[cbgirl]

:D */insert comment about cbgirl's sexy boobs here/* (what I'm thinking cannot be posted on this board - it's just... NSFW lol)

So PM me anytime ;) lol

[JohnnyR]

So PM me anytime ;) lol

haha didn't your mum tell you to be careful what you wish for? :D