My first free site Validate

[jgaraza]

Hi, i´m a newbie here and i have finish my first free site if anyone can validate the site so i can submit it
URL: http://www.tititwister.com/fs/linnea_ass_fucked/
thanks

[HarryM]

Here u go (http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.tititwister.com%2Ffs%2Flinnea_ass_fucked%2F&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline&group=0) 121 errors

[Greenguy]

Your grammar is bad & the title of the site seems to be based on the 2nd gallery & not the entire site.

[jgaraza]

ok thanks Greenie i don´t speak english very well can you help me with the grammar??? now i`m going to change the title.
And HarryMuff i know i have html validation errors i´m a programmer and web designer but right know i don´t care about that thanks for your validation!!

[jgaraza]

other thing i think i have to submit it in teen other than anal???

[jgaraza]

What do you think about this title "Sweet Teenie Before Bed Cock" ???

[LowryBigwood]

What do you think about this title "Sweet Teenie Before Bed Cock" ???

Does not make sense. Maybe "sweet teenie cock before bed" might. Add words or change it up somehow, because right now it makes zero sense.

[jgaraza]

ok thanks LowryBigwood how about this "Teen riding cock before bed"??

[LowryBigwood]

ok thanks LowryBigwood how about this "Teen riding cock before bed"??

That works.

[secretagentwilly]

Your sites not loading and I'm on highspeed cable...so don't know what to tell you...good luck...

[jgaraza]

sorry Easymama i have change the name of the folder some thing that Greenie told me
the new page is http://www.tititwister.com/fs/sweet_teenie_fucked

[johnnybg]

You don't need that many pics in your galleries. Check the rules of LLs you plan to submit to. Safest bet is 24. There are a few that require 30.

Also, use spelling checker on your pages.

[jgaraza]

good tip!!!
thanks Johnnybg