My first free site...What do You think abou?

[Fairy7]

Hi,

Im newbie... just looking for some bucks |bananna| .... I was looking on other webmasters job and I build my own site: http://www.tsfreesites.com/samantha/

What do you think about?|confused|

Ta

[AndyS]

Hiya
The look of your site is defiantly not the worst first try I have seen but there are a lot of spelling/grammar errors on those pages which will affect your listing potential. The text has the feel of being put through a translator program and just does not flow for me.
I get the feeling your first language is not English and you are from Poland or somewhere?

[fresh]

I get the feeling your first language is not English and you are from Poland or somewhere?

lol there is about 200 non english speaking countries in the world and you know only Poland :D

[AndyS]

lol should i have listed all 200 :D

[Porn Junkie]

Not too shabby but one thing thats really bugging me is the blood coming out of my eyes right now.

The red background with red text really hurt my eyes. |verysad

[alcorp]

Not too shabby but one thing thats really bugging me is the blood coming out of my eyes right now.

The red background with red text really hurt my eyes. |verysad

My eyesight is not brilliant, I just cannot read it, looks blurred. |verysad

[Fairy7]

Hi guys,

thanks for your opinions, I fixed up the site: http://www.tsfreesites.com/samantha/ can you review it again?
build another one:
http://www.tsfreesites.com/amanda/


What do you think about:
- ads; not too big? not too much (3 ads are allowed?)
- link back; I have not recipes but text link (it's OK?), not too much?
- I have two diffrent models on gallery 1 and gallery2

AndyS you're right... my first language is not English...

Thanks in advance for all your help

[spacemanspiff]

Ads are ok. Recips are fine. Two different models...no problem. Translation could be better. I'm not very picky on that but some will be.

All in all, not bad. I'd list em.

Are you planning to target other niches besides tranny? If not, you might want to get more domains. It gets hard to list sites when you submit to a single category using the same domain day after day.

[Fairy7]

Thanks for Your opinion Spacemanspiff.

Once again thanks in advance for your all replays guys.

Cheers