Round 2: How are the revised freesites

[Kenny B!]

Okay so we've taken your advice on that last batch of freesites and here's round 2, would these get listed:

http://kbprod.com/vince/March12/1/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March12/2/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March12/3/

http://kbprod.com/vince/March13/1/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March13/2/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March13/3/

Please be honest (and constructive)

[Greenguy]

Much better.

[Tekster]

I am no expert and I don't have the experience to give advice, but I will say that they look quite a bit better than the previous sites. I see titles and more nudity. Also they are different enough from one another as not to look like the same template over and over. Anyway, I like them and I would use them on my hub.|thumb

[Preacher]

Thirded |thumb

[pornhitzman]

It´s a work of art!

[SheepGuy]

They're pretty good and I'll use them, but the titles don't really grab me.
"My Red Dress", "My Black Bikini", if I put them in my kinky cat with those titles nobody will know what the fetish is.
I can always change that though, put the title as "My Smoking Red Dress" or "Smoking Hot Black Bikini". I don't use descriptions on my LL so I'm a little, or maybe a lot different |loony|

Nice designs though, and I'll use them.

[Greenguy]

They're pretty good and I'll use them, but the titles don't really grab me.
"My Red Dress", "My Black Bikini", if I put them in my kinky cat with those titles nobody will know what the fetish is.
I can always change that though, put the title as "My Smoking Red Dress" or "Smoking Hot Black Bikini". I don't use descriptions on my LL so I'm a little, or maybe a lot different |loony|...I was gonna mention that, but I was happy that Kenny got them to not have the girls name :D

Yes, the titles could have more references to the content - smoking, smoke, puff, cigs, etc - just don't go nuts & title 5 of them "Smoking....." because I know when I go to a Link List & the sites are listed in alphabetical order, if I see a lot of sites on the same domain with the same 1st word in the title, I tend to skip past them.

This is where you could actually use the model's name.
Claire Has A Puff
Hot Monica Really Is Smoking
Naked Janet Enjoys A Menthol
etc.

[Kenny B!]

Thanks for your time guys it's appreciated and we will be applying this to all new freesites.

[ladydesigner]

Those look much better. I'll be adding them to my sites.

Thanks Kenny B for listening to LL owners and being open to changing/fixing problems with your hfs. Much appreciated. |thumb

[biztro]

Those are some great freesites! I like the design very much, you are talented!

[Surfn]

Now you're getting close to where I would use them. I do not have the time to tweak them myself these days unfortunately.

Keep it up and you'll get there soon for those like me :)

[Kenny B!]

Thanks, I'll post another batch soon just to make sure we're still on the right track!