built my first freesite

[born2blog]

Well, I've never really ventured into the land of freesites but decided to give it a go. Here is my first example: http://www.lovelylizvicious.com/redhead-teen/index.html

Any comments/advice/suggestions are welcome, even if they are negative. Like I say, it's my first one so be as brutally honest as you'd like, I don't mind as long as it's constructive criticism.

[SheepGuy]

Nice site ;)
Very clean, you've got room for another banner on your gallery pages but I don't know that it would helps sales to have one.
I like it.

[born2blog]

thanks SheepGuy, I appreciate any feedback!

[Shark]

Nice creature.
onlybestsex.com , rexporn.com and freesexhard.com will list your site ;)

[japamor]

Hi born2blog

First thing I noticed is that you only have 1 linked sponsor bannner on your warning and main page plus 1 unlinked. You're allowed 3 and you might as well use them. Also the wording under your bottom banner just more or less repeats what's on the banner - try and say something new about the site - Gorgeous Ginger Teen or something.

Watch out for blind links on your main page. Those thumbs should be unlinked as you already have text links to each gallery.

On your gallery pages you've got a second sponsor link but you need to link that big top banner.

Its a nice looking site. Someone's got design skills! I'd certainly list it.
Cheers

[born2blog]

Nice creature.
onlybestsex.com , rexporn.com and freesexhard.com will list your site ;)

thanks a million, I will submit there :)

[born2blog]

Hi born2blog

First thing I noticed is that you only have 1 linked sponsor bannner on your warning and main page plus 1 unlinked. You're allowed 3 and you might as well use them. Also the wording under your bottom banner just more or less repeats what's on the banner - try and say something new about the site - Gorgeous Ginger Teen or something.

Watch out for blind links on your main page. Those thumbs should be unlinked as you already have text links to each gallery.

On your gallery pages you've got a second sponsor link but you need to link that big top banner.

Its a nice looking site. Someone's got design skills! I'd certainly list it.
Cheers

Thanks for the kind words and great advice!! I'm sure over time I will get better at building freesites

[Tobbe]

Site is looking great born2blog! ;)

[ronnie]

I agree looks real nice. As said, you could have more ads, why not take advantage. Also, just so you know, the banners you are using usually dont pull much for clicks, that size and type. We all want to get as many surfers to the sponsor as possible...:)

[Xallow]

Nice looking site, though I agree that You need to do more to drive people to click those links to the sponsor. I would definately accept it

[Lemmy]

Nice site. I would definitely list it.

[bluemoney]

Nice site. I would definitely list it.

I agree. Also nice use of colors imho |thumb

[Mateusz]

Title could be a bit shorter (3, eventually 4 words) but site itself looks great.