Need feedback on first freesite

[ieatjackets]

Hey guys I'm new to this forum though I'm not entirely new to the adult industry.

Anyway, I just built my first freesite and before I make the plunge and submit, I'd like to get some feedback on it. Any and all comments would be appreciated, as I'm just a total newbie when it comes to freesites.

http://hornyfrank.com/free/babe-deepthroats-dick/

[Preacher]

Hi, welcome.

Index:
Way too much linked text in that ad box. Many lists say they accept up to 3 lines of linked text.
I'd take Tommy's recip off as you need a submitters account to get listed there and if you are new you most likely do not have one.

Main:
Looks good to me. |thumb

Galleries:
Too much linked text again.
Some of those pictures are kinda blurry.
Some of the pictures appear to be over 100K. A few linklists want them under 80, most want them under 100k.

Other then that, it looks really good. |thumb

[ieatjackets]

Thank you so much for your comments!

I updated the gallery quite a bit; I changed the title, added new thumbs and new pics, and made the changes to the links like you said. I think it's pretty good, and I'm going to try a submit and see what happens.

If anyone else has any comments to add, I'm still and always ready to accept constructive criticism! :)

New url: http://hornyfrank.com/free/she-loves-deepthroat/

[Lemmy]

I didn't see the first attempt, but I don't have any issues with the way it is now. Looks good!

[ieatjackets]

Great, I'm glad to hear it! :)

On a side note, is it a good idea to put META tags? Do they help with building PR and all that good stuff?

[Fonz]

META tags aren't going to influence your PR (I think).
But they are good for your SE ranking and stuff, at least if they're relevant to what's on your site. I would certainly add them to every page you build.

[bur-ak]

"OOOPS! Page not found" |huh

[Preacher]

If anyone else has any comments to add, I'm still and always ready to accept constructive criticism! :)

New url: http://hornyfrank.com/free/she-loves-deepthroat/
Hmm, can't recall if this was on the first site and I just missed it, but some Linklists have a rule against hardcore on the index/warning page.

[ieatjackets]

"OOOPS! Page not found" |huh
Check the third post. I wish I could edit my first post but apparently not...|huh

Hmm, can't recall if this was on the first site and I just missed it, but some Linklists have a rule against hardcore on the index/warning page.

Ahh, yeah, it was. Alright well thank you I'll keep that in mind. |thumb

Thanks everyone for your continued feedback.