Free Site Review

[Jeff8682]

If anyone is bored and has the time to review my first freesite please check this link out:
http://www.xxxutopia.com/fs/1/teen/index.html
Thanks.

[ponygirl]

If anyone is bored and has the time to review my first freesite please check this link out:
http://www.xxxutopia.com/fs/1/teen/index.html
Thanks.
Hya! Welcome to GG&J, you should also post in the welcome thread :)

I've got a minute so I'll give it a shot :D

-you're missing your HTML declaration in your source code, this has been discussed here and apparently it can mess up your page in certain browsers
- the banner on the index page says 'enter here' which is a no-no; the only enter link on the index should be to the main page
- your colors don't work too well, it's hard to see the pink text on the blue background
- you may want to change from the default font & make the text links a bit bigger, same reason - they're hard to see
- the AFF banner on the index page won't fly - most (if not all) LLs don't like java on freesites
- you're going to need a title (3-4 words) and description visible on the index page at least, something that describes the site without using the same name as the paysite
- the thumbs on the galleries are distorted, you should resize them not force the sizing on the page
- the big pics are a bit heavy, you'll want to keep them under 80kb, ideally around 40-60
- those big pics on the gallery pages are completely blind, you'll get rejected for that alone. You can't have a thumb going to the paysite, which is what it looks like.

that's just a quick glimpse, others may have more advice for you. Don't take anything personally, it's actually a pretty clean site & just needs some tweaking :)

[virgohippy]

Also: I count 5 outgoing links on your gallery pages. Needs to be 3.

[Fonz]

Ponygirl and virgohippy summed it all up. Take their advice, change what has to be changed and ask for another review. Before you know it you'll be making millions :)

[virgohippy]

Before you know it you'll be making millions :)

I guess my big bag of money got lost in the mail. |huh

[Jeff8682]

Ok I fixed up most of the problems I think. Take a look again if someone has a chance. Thanks.

[Fonz]

That's much better already, your thumbs still look a bit distorted and you have a few pics/thumbs that appear on the site more than once. Never use a thumb and picture more than once.