Need a little help

[Tar]

Hi All!
I need a little help from my new friends - from you!
I've been in the business for a little over a few months and
I need your comments about a web design of my free website
(top mistakes etc.). I have only 3 signups(May) and 1 rebill(Jun)
and else... can I use of text reciptional links?

freesite -->
http://www.shockingdbsm.com/free/f_007/bdsmmasocist/

freesite -->
http://www.shockingdbsm.com/free/f_011/bdsmeasy/

er404 -->
http://www.shockingdbsm.com/

robots.txt -->
User-agent: *
Disallow: /cgi-bin/
Disallow: /free/
Disallow: /images/

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Thanks,
Tar.

[Nenad]

http://www.shockingdbsm.com/free/f_007/bdsmmasocist/
Maybe am wrong but you have on:
index page - 5 outgoing links
main page - 4 outgoing links
gall 1 - 4 outgoing links
gall 2 - 4 outgoing links

Maximum allowed outgoing links per page is 3.
http://www.link-o-rama.com/greenguy/therules.htm

[Tar]

Thanx for responding!

[spacemanspiff]

Why do you have this?

Disallow: /free/

[Tar]

Hi spacemanspiff!

"Disallow: /free/"

It is corrected by me right now.
What do you think about SEO, it's really cool ?

[Tar]

About SEO.
http://www.submitexpress.com

I used some free tools.
What do you think about their pay service? I mean..
really raises traffic?

[spacemanspiff]

There are some good SEO companies out there, but there are a lot of scam artists too. You just have to be careful. I would suggest learning all the stuff and just doing it yourself.

[webslave]

re: http://www.shockingdbsm.com/free/f_007/main.html
you talk about your "mistress" then show pics of a man/master
the description doesn't match the pics.
Also - IMO - not sure the surfers want to read that much. I would limit it to a paragraph a page - if that. I get better sign ups with just a few sentences that tells them they want more.

[Servhot]

I think the main problem is the content itself. You are promissing "shocking BDSM" but can't find anything shocking :)

[Tar]

re: "..the description doesn't match the pics."
re: "..but can't find anything shocking"

I have understood you and ..
I'll make it to other design.


BIG Thanx to All ..and excuse me for my English.
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Good Luck!
Tar

[ronnie]

Why so much linked text on the first site? Maybe it's just me but it's really annoying to have paragraphs of linked text. Plus the "Get full access" red bar would be seen as a blind link to many.

ronnie

[Useless]

Looking at the first site, unlink that big graphic header on the index. The English text throughout the site is shit. Unlink the BIG big blindlinked black and white pics on the main and gallery pages.

Does RiseHosting have a relationship with RiseCash?

[Tar]

Hi ronnie, Useless Warrior!

I think do you right.
Can you give me a samples (URL) of really good sites?