please critique my free site

[sbl]

Hi there, this is my first kick of the cat at making a free site, please give me your seasoned opinions.|bow| |bow| |bow| |bow|

:D


http://springbreaklesbian.com/springbreak/acapulco_spring_break/




thnx

[MrYum]

Hey there Sbl |waves|

I'll take a shot at ya for kicking the cat :D

First off, your domain is listed as being for sale...that will cost you some listings.

Moving on to your site itself...

Entry page...looks pretty clean...perhaps a bit too clean actually. Get some ads on that page...you can have up to 3 outbound links...you'll want to use em. Your entry page is the first chance to make the sale...mmmm....sales |thumb

Main page...again, very clean. Also again, get some ads on the page. The link you do have at the bottom is a blind link. Here's a good reference to learn about blind links and how to avoid them.

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/showthread.php?t=23441

Galleries...well, you got all 3 outbound sponsor links. But, they're all pretty blind...you'll definitely want to read that thread :)

Overall, a good first kick...a bit plain perhaps, but at least it's clean and a good starting point |thumb

[sbl]

LOL
Oops, looks like I got the idiom wrong! hehe

Great points, I forgot that I had it listed for sale.

Thanks for the link, interesting read! :0)