Review required please

[GriseyV2]

Hiya Guys,
I made this today http://www.bustybeccy.com/links/azw/index.php this will be for affiliates to use but i would like your view of what sucks about it and what can be done tobe made better . My icq is 204-611-741 incase someone wants to hit me up

[RawAlex]

Okay, the second gallery is missing, so no comment there.

4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong.

Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe.

Alex

[Fonz]

It's probably not a good idea to show her topless on the first gallery and completely clothed on the second gallery. It could be that the second gallery uses a different picture set but I'd use that one as gallery 1 and not gallery 2.

Also on the gallery pages the links to the sponsor didn't look very appealing to me, try to grab the surfer's attention a little more.

[GriseyV2]

4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong.
Changed

Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe.

Alex
I put some more spaces on the main.php do you think the galleries could do with more spaces ?

It's probably not a good idea to show her topless on the first gallery and completely clothed on the second gallery. It could be that the second gallery uses a different picture set but I'd use that one as gallery 1 and not gallery 2.

Changed them around
Also on the gallery pages the links to the sponsor didn't look very appealing to me, try to grab the surfer's attention a little more.
Is that any better ?

Thanks for checking it over guys would help helpful if you did again just to check the changes are better

Wayne

[Beaver Bob]

the picture linking to gallery 2 works, but the linking text 'Gallery 2' is missing the ? between .php and id

[GriseyV2]

the picture linking to gallery 2 works, but the linking text 'Gallery 2' is missing the ? between .php and id
Thanks man, fixed

[MrYum]

Noticed the site scrolls a bit sideways at 800 wide. Other than the side scroll and you still have a couple pics at the end of the 2nd gallery that are out of sequence...it be lookin good |thumb

Oh, and she's a cutie too...hubba hubba :D

[selena]

2nd gallery pics are not in sequence.

[Xeno]

Looking good to me

I'd make the Gallery entry photos just a wee bit smaller (although that is just me), either way, I am sure it'll work for the surfer.

[RawAlex]

The spacing is better, the text links look better, but the images between the two galleries are out of sequence. Even a gallery of images is leading people towards click on to the site... build them from "clothed" to near naked / naked at the end... make them want to see more.

Alex

[GriseyV2]

Regarding the pics of the 2 galleries they are 2 different sets some people said that would be better or should i just do 10 pics per gallery from the same set ?

[Xeno]

Either option should be fine...as long as (most LL will want this) the images are in sequence if they are from the same photo shoot (set) and together. If each gallery is from a different set on their own, that is fine too. The oother option (as I have seen) is each image is from a different set creating 10 different unique images per gallery.

[GriseyV2]

O.k changed the 2 images around on gallery 2 |bananna|