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natron
2005-12-30, 03:27 AM
Can you guys ket me know what you think of my galleries? What could I do to improve them? Am I on the right track? Too much graphics or ads? Any advice would be great. Ive been submittting for awhile now but Im still new and I know there is room for improvement.

Thanks,
Nate

http://8teeners.com/tgp/alison-angel16/alisonangel-cs.html
http://8teeners.com/tgp/alison-angel20/alison-angel-cs.html
http://8teeners.com/tgp/jamie2/first-time-video-jamie-cs.html
http://8teeners.com/tgp/alison-angel15/alisonangel2-cs.html
http://8teeners.com/tgp/alison-angel-pics1/alison-angel-pics-cs.html
http://8teeners.com/tgp/kirsten2/kireten-alison-playmate-cs.html
http://8teeners.com/tgp/alison-angel19/alsion-angel-laguna-beach.html
http://8teeners.com/tgp/kirsten/first-time-video-cs.html
http://8teeners.com/tgp/mandy/mandy-first-video-cs.html
http://8teeners.com/tgp/melia2/ftv-toy1-cs.html

alvarez
2005-12-30, 05:50 AM
not bad :), I prefer better movie sample screens

natron
2005-12-30, 07:19 AM
not bad :), I prefer better movie sample screens
Can you give me an example of what you mean? Can you tell me what you think is wrong with my samples. Am I giving the surfer too much or not enough?

Beachbum
2005-12-30, 10:11 PM
Natron, I like your galleries. Clean, Simple and to the point. A little to clean for my taste ( I prefer more hardcore) but nice work. Depending on where you submit them they could do well. Maybe try using more descriptive text. Pretty good work though.

mist
2006-01-01, 08:45 AM
Fine galleries, you got there, I should try to highlight the screen caps a bit with maybe a simple border and turn upp the contrast on them a bit. But overall nice work.

Mist

pvtspanky
2006-01-01, 07:37 PM
I would adjust the brightness/contrast on the thumbs & sharpen them up a bit... Other than that, everything looks pretty good:)

natron
2006-01-01, 11:42 PM
Thanks you guys. :)