Built and designed a TGP filled it, but is it ok?

[BOSS]

Hi forum, I am a noob to this forum and a noob to the adult scene. I have some coding/designs abilities though.

http://www.girlincontrol.com

I was just wondering if my tgp look ok and if anybody in the same nitch wants to trade. I want to keep my tgp clean but do not know if it is possible to make $$/traffic like that. Also who would trade with me since most tgp's i have seen are full of redirects and pop ups and I dont really want em.

I am building a few others and just wondering if i could get some critisizm now from the pros so I dont make the same mistakes.


Thanks, and looking forward to working with you guys in the future.

Andrey

[Adult Traffic]

It's a nice concept and layout. I like the name as compared to the niche a lot. IMO you should change the font to Verdana and lighten it up. Not white font, maybe burnt yellow or light brown or tan.

IMO.

Nice work, sexi site. :)
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[mrenaud]

I think your site has potential.

I would change however the colours, very hard to read which is something you definately dont want

[GeorgeTH]

I think your site has potential.

I would change however the colours, very hard to read which is something you definately dont want

I agree with BOTH points - specially the grey text on the right (your sponsor links?) - almost impossible to read.

[BOSS]

You guys are right..i looked at my site on other monitors and it was difficult to read...just mine is set on ultra light (lcd) thats why it looked ok. I will play with the design a bit to make it more accessible.

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