Would u please revieuw my free site?

[Corner_Tommy]

http://www.lesboplayground.com/FREESITES/PLP/index.html

would u please tell me what you think of my first freesite? :)

thank!

[LowryBigwood]

Looks pretty good to me, especially for being your first freesite. One thing that I noticed was your "All models on this website are 18 years of age or older. All images are in compliance with 18 U.S.C. § 2257 and 28 C.F.R. § 75." As I learned from GreenGuy last week, you really need a url, either linked or just the text of the url to where the 2257 page can be found.

[Verbal]

I'd list it if you limited your text links to 3 lines each. And what Lowry said about the 2257 info being linked up. Not bad at all for your first freesite. :)

[Presmar]

http://www.lesboplayground.com/FREESITES/PLP/index.html

would u please tell me what you think of my first freesite? :)

thank!


Looks good to me...would look even better if my recip was on it... ;)

[Mateusz]

Looks nice but...
as you may have noticed (in main LL forum) it could be hard to get listed in lesbian category (due to uncountable lesbian submits) especially with free content so I suggest to try also less popular niches
also I don't really like banners saying "ENTER HERE" on index page

[Corner_Tommy]

Looks nice but...
as you may have noticed (in main LL forum) it could be hard to get listed in lesbian category (due to uncountable lesbian submits) especially with free content so I suggest to try also less popular niches
also I don't really like banners saying "ENTER HERE" on index page

Yeah ive saw that, im looking for other content right now. thank for noticing!

and ive made sum changes to the site, could u maybe review it again?

http://www.lesboplayground.com/FREESITES/PLP/index.html

[Mateusz]

You should remove link from 2257 page - it goes to main page so it (may but not must) go through this time but better don't get such habbits and remove it right now.
Also noticed you got 4 outgoing links on index page- bottom ad in fact got two links. As Greenguy counts ads (as far as I know) not links it could be accepted but most LL owners probably would decline it - try to combine those two into one

[Corner_Tommy]

thanks for ya help Mateusz :)

ive changed the stuff and gonna start submitting right now :)

thanks for everybodys help!

[ronnie]

As mentioned, lesbian has really been over worked lately. Not to mention the two sponsors you are using have really been pushed alot lately. Might hurt your chances.

ronnie