Newbie needs review

[Briskit]

Can someone review this for me before I submit it.

www.4hotxxx.com/sexy-young-lesbians

Thanks Briskit |waves|

[Cleo]

You use lots of text which is a very good thing.

Your pics are over compressed and will hurt you in getting listed.

Some of your links are a bit blind.
Like this one
"Cum watch sexy young lesbians have a strap on party
And a pussy licking contest!"

Add in the sponsor's name so that it isn't blind.
Like this
Cum watch sexy young lesbians have a strap on party at LesboErotica
And a pussy licking contest!
Click Here for LesboErotica

I don't care for the red text on a green background. You may want to take a look at the colors use don the sponsor's site for ideas on what colors to use.

[Briskit]

Thanks for the suggestions Cleo! Anyone else have anything to add!

Thanks Briskit

[Mateusz]

What Cleo said,
but I think your 'Watch these pussy licking nymphos' link on index page is even more blind,
+ you may have troubles with getting listed at few LL becouse lack of nudity in gallery1 (ie. Greenguy's link-o-rama),
+ you are using old Outlaws Porn recip

[Thumbler]

Basically what Cleo and Mateusz said, especially the image quality and blind links. I would also take some of the exclamation marks out, you don't need one at the end of every sentence.

[ronnie]

I was going to say about the image quality, Cleo Already got that.. duh..:)

Full size pics are on the small side also, might get you rejected.

ronnie

[keephonest]

hello everybody!
i'm new to this board and hope learning more at here...
keephonest

[Certifiedbitch]

welcome and Briskit and keephonest!:)

what Cleo said is right..the quality of the images are not very good.

[LowryBigwood]

Briskit, good job. Briskit is a personal friend of mine, and I assure you he is honest. :)