Please review my Free Site ...

[O-K-N]

hi this is my free site and already listed in some LLs. What do u think? Can u see any wrong points ?
http://www.dailyfreeporn.net/free/hot-cartoon-actions/
Thanks...

[Halfdeck]

Hi OKN,

The one thing that sticks out at me is the text. e.g. "We guarantee." "Choose Your Way To the Best Porn.", "See Pictures ," (space between s and ,), "Are You Still Waiting . " (no question mark, doesn't say what you're waiting FOR), "What are you looking for."(missing ?). "Watch Hentai girls screaming" "ARE LOOKiNG FOR FRESH HENTAi PORN. " (unusal capitalization plus no question mark).

Other minor points:

You don't have any meta keyword/descriptions on your index.html.

Your sponsor links might look less confusing with a mouseover.

The logo graphix is a little hard to read.

The exit/enter links are too close together imo.

The warning text table could use padding.

You might to better with keyword-rich htmls, instead of gallery1.html, main.html.

Nice looking site though, just need a few minor tweaks.

EDIT: Your exit link goes to google.com.

[O-K-N]

Thanks For your Reply . My English is really bad.So it s really diffucult to write texts for sponsor link. i make mistakes everytime. i ll always use meta tags on my pages.Thanks
Please post about my free site...

[swedguy]

Hi O-K-N,

You might want to format your links a little better too

Are you interested in Cartoon Animations? CLICK HERE AND
GET INSTANT ACCESS

Might want to change it to:

Are you interested in Cartoon Animations?
CLICK HERE AND GET INSTANT ACCESS

and...

Choose Your Way To the Best Porn.CLICK HERE AND GET INSTANT
ACCESS

to:

Choose Your Way To the Best Porn!
CLICK HERE AND GET INSTANT ACCESS

Just minor things, but it looks a little better. Since people are surfing on so many different resolutions it's better that you format the links for a table that fits within 800 res, that way you know that everybody will see them the way you want it to :)

The Gallery 1/2 link graphic is also screwed in FireFox. There's an empty space between Gallery 1 and Gallery 2.
Other than that it looks good :)

[MrMaryLou]

Take a peek at gallery two you have a few censored images that can and will cause you not to get listed in some places

[Certifiedbitch]

your site is nice but it needs some editing especially the text as suggested by Halfdeck too.

[O-K-N]

Thanks For your replys