My Submission for today - please comment

[{fusion}]

Hi Gang,

Here is my submission for today, it was just hand submitted to a select few as I dont have submission tools ect.

Let me know what you think, as im very new to doing free sites and want to learn more.

It took about 3 hours in total

Site

http://www.iansamateurs.com/deven/index.htm

[Cleo]

The pic linked to a sponsor on the main page is a blind link so that is a problem.

No need to put recips on your gallery pages, remove them.

The pics are pretty softcore, some places aren't going to list you without full nudity.

I would remove the word free from your title.

[{fusion}]

Thanks for taking the time to look at it, ive made changes you suggested.

I have noted all this down also

once again many thanks

[CrazySy]

Damn, that looks like a carbon copy of my warning pages without the sponsor links |jester| same font same exact words.

[RawAlex]

You could take the recips off the second page (you have them already on the index page) and replace that with a nice text ad, selling the virtues of visiting devon's main site.

Alex

[Cleo]

When did the recips get on the main page? I don't remember seeing them there earlier.

Yeah warning page only for recips.

I would also remove the counter on all the pages except the warning page.

CrazySy what are you saying? Are you saying that {fusion} copied your work???

[CrazySy]

Cleo, it's a warning page and I really don't care about it as I see it very general as long as fonts and the page layout is changed a bit but that one looks like to be a copy of mine with a little modification as I do use two sponsor links on my index pages and there not a single one on that, as I said I really don't care but a little bit change would have been nice :)

[{fusion}]

Nothing was copied here, I spent few hours doing it all. I run www.iansamateurs.com , www.asiandevils.com which I all designed myself.

I do have my own style i think, maybe it just looks similar but nothing is copied, im not that lame and if i was i wouldnt submit a copied site to forum.

Could you post your site so I can see it

[CrazySy]

Ok first of all we could have carried this in the other thread but I guess you wanted it to have it's own thread...LOL

If you saw my post I said it "LOOKS LIKE" to be a copy of mine and I never came to you and attack you but you do have the right to see my link http://www.amateursplayroom.com/free/busty-mom/ and I do change the size and the font once in a while so they all don't look exactly alike and when I saw your it just so much remined of my own ;)

[{fusion}]

it was meant to be added to the other post sorry.

I will work on a new style tomorrow, as yeah it looks similar on the main index page.

[Cleo]

I don't think they look that much alike.

The code is completely written different as well.

[Greenguy]

You have the recip table set at "width=102%" - makes it look rather odd.

[{fusion}]

Im working on new design as we speak. I will post it later for review. I have taken notes from cleo so hopefully the design should be better.

I guess it is a learning curve, trail and error thing.

It is great to have a place to get advice though, instead of being blacklisted ect.

It is good you guys give up some of your busy time to help others.