Please tell me your opinion about these free sites

[Fido]

Hi all.

A few days ago I started to build free sites and submited them to linklists and I am a bit depressed from traffic quantity they are getting. I try to build, clean, nice, surfer friendly SEOed sites, but looks like it is not enough to make money :). Could you please look at them and tell me if there is anything else I can do to bring more traffic to them? Or is it wrong, maybe too small, niche I selected to start with?

Sites are

http://www.perfectpissing.com/toiletpissing/
http://www.absolutepissing.com/outdoorpissing/
http://www.perfectpissing.com/maturepissing/

First ad on the index.htm page is always replaced with recip table, these version I try to submit to DMOZ.

Thank you for any sugesstions.

[Greenguy]

I don't see anything wrong with them, other than you can probably leave the 3rd gallery off each one that you submit to Link Lists (the 2 galleries have plenty of pics)

[Certifiedbitch]

hi Fido, welcome to the board!|bananna| |bananna|

btw, your free sites look good...

[Dylan]

Too many free pics on your free sites.

Build free sites in other niches.

[Fido]

Thank you all for your opinions. I will surely try to lower number of pictures on each freesite. I have not noticed this from my point of view. Thanks.

[Greenguy]

The minimum number of pics is usually 20, with 10 per gallery page. You have 48, which is overkill.

I'd say get rid of the 3rd gallery (you can make 1 new free site & have 1/2 of a 2nd one with the 3 galleries that you remove)