Freesite newbie - review request

[leedogg]

I'm about to begin submitting freesites for the first time ever.
Could someone please point out:

a) anything I have done that will stop me getting listed?
b) anything I could do better to help sales etc

PS: I know the sponsor isn't linked up yet etc

Thanks in advance and have a great 2005!

http://www.tagteamedsluts.com/blonde_honey_gets_banged/index.htm

[Mateusz]

I belive using banners with 'enter here' text (especially on index page) is not too good - better change it or you may get declined..
Also there is no need to target 2257 page into new window.
Besides that I would try to make ads more visible and I dont mean 'use bigger font'

[Greenguy]

Yeah - the small default font makes things look sorta bland.

[leedogg]

Thanks guys
Keep it coming anyone else!
Appreciate the help

[binxgook]

Some LL's might consider the banner on your index to be a hardcore. Some may not.

[FTS]

aside from the stuff already mentioned, it seems pretty good :)