Anybody feel like checking my site for me?

[Presmar]

I am newbie

Can anyone that knows something about making money in this business critic my site for me. I new to this and it's my only site.

If you do check it out be hard on me please, I can take the criticism as long as I get some good advice and it puts some extra cash in my pocket.:)

I want to know what I need to do to make more money with it, even if it means scrapping it and starting all over.

I put a lot of time into it and I get a lot of page views and free traffic from yahoo, what can I do to convert some of my visitors?

Here is my url http://www.sex-free-teen.com

Thanks
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[DangerDave]

Presmar,

That site in and of itself is not "bad"... but its a bit wastefull.. too much content for the surfer..

If this site is working - eg: making you some $$.. then make another one.... and maybe double your income...

There are alot of things on your site that I would change,..... but if its there, and its getting Se traffic.. I wouldn't go changing much..

So... more sites, smaller sites, more and better advertising..

There is a few "formulas" for building different sites... free sites, big free sites, AVS sites, Galleries etc.. havge a look at some other threads here to see what people are doing.

DD