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Marchello
2004-12-22, 09:01 PM
http://www.nastyplace.com/freepa/

Tittle: Jesse Capelli
Description: Take a look around and hopefully you will love what you see
Name: Marchello
e-mail: wm@nastyplace.com
Category: Amateur, Blonde, Babes

Please i work a lot and i want to work good so please help me to do that way:)

If my domain or mail is on your Ll blaclist ( GG i think on yours too because you send me only 200 visitors for 1 month ) please tell me reson,
Sincery Marchello

swedguy
2004-12-22, 09:20 PM
Hi Marchello.

* Penisbot recip is broken.
* Your description doesn't really describe your site/content.
* Some LL's doesn't like that you name your site the same as the sponsor site.
* Your pics are 404 and redirects to http://www.nastyplace.com/index.html
* "View Photos" might be considered a deceptive link. It doesn't lead to the 67 photos you described, it leads to the tour.

I couldn't find any working pics but from looking at the thumbs, she doesn't really look blonde. But it's hard to tell from just the thumbs :)

Other than that, I think it looks ok :)

Marchello
2004-12-22, 09:39 PM
Originally posted by swedguy
Hi Marchello.

* Penisbot recip is broken.
* Your description doesn't really describe your site/content.
* Some LL's doesn't like that you name your site the same as the sponsor site.
* Your pics are 404 and redirects to http://www.nastyplace.com/index.html
* "View Photos" might be considered a deceptive link. It doesn't lead to the 67 photos you described, it leads to the tour.

I couldn't find any working pics but from looking at the thumbs, she doesn't really look blonde. But it's hard to tell from just the thumbs :)

Other than that, I think it looks ok :)

Uff i was not consider her name is like site name,
because after all her name is her name i can not change that,
description will be changed next time ( i don't know why but i was try to do something different with this ) :)
thumbs and penisbot recip fixed

thx for tips i really appreciate that after all we are need to work right and not to make mistakes|rasta|

Fonz
2004-12-22, 09:49 PM
All the things Swedguy said...
The description was a total turnoff for me to.

Also keep your pics in order please, I see that your're using pics of her in leather mixed with pics of her in lingerie..

Nargule
2004-12-22, 10:00 PM
Your thumbs are still broken. When I click on most of them I get redirected.

You can name the site anything your want. It doesn't have to be the girl's name.

swedguy
2004-12-22, 10:01 PM
Originally posted by Marchello
Uff i was not consider her name is like site name,
because after all her name is her name i can not change that Dirty Blonde in Leather
Sexy Leather Babe
Jesse Capelli Wearing Leather
Sexy Amateur Wearing Leather

...or some other title that Overture can come up with =)

Marchello
2004-12-22, 10:04 PM
Originally posted by Nargule
Your thumbs are still broken. When I click on most of them I get redirected.

You can name the site anything your want. It doesn't have to be the girl's name.

I can not solve that problem with thumbs,
shit i have big problem this time that site is on,
but just 7 pictures don't work other work fine i don't see reson

swedguy
2004-12-22, 10:06 PM
Haven't uploaded the pics?

Marchello
2004-12-22, 10:11 PM
Originally posted by swedguy
Haven't uploaded the pics?

I think that now is everything ok,
yes totally forgot to upload rest of pictures because my connection breack at one moment.

FTS
2004-12-22, 10:19 PM
asside from the mentioned things, the site looks pretty decent.. good job :)