Dangerdave

[rick69]

Hello!

I have resubmitted:

http://www.nasty-sex-free.com/teen18/

and

http://www.nasty-sex-free.com/pinkpleasure/

I did the changes u wanted and used a better email adress

(webmaster@nasty-sex-free.com)

Soo.. what's wrong now? Or maybe you havent had the time yet???

Kind regards!! |bananna|

[DangerDave]

rick69,

I can't remember if I actually "saw" the site last time...

but there are a couple of small probs IMO that if fixed will make the site alot better.

Re: - http://www.nasty-sex-free.com/teen18/

- this page needs a title - eg text within the page.. Adding a title.. not only identifyies your site as who and what it is but makes it much more SE friendly.

So if the site is "Teen Pink Pussy 18" put it on the page. Like you did here.. - http://www.nasty-sex-free.com/teen18/index2.htm

Re: - http://www.nasty-sex-free.com/teen18/index2.htm

I dont like "pic" type images linked to sponsors.. especially when they dominaate the page at 800x 600.

I would move them below the gallery links.

Also this page I would make the galleries clearer, and again use some keywords in the links.. "Tawny Stone gallery" etc...
You also have enuff content for two sites here.. so make another and halve the content.

HTH

DD