My first free site

[Titan]

Hi!

I have built my first free site: http://www.sexbaloon.com/sex/Cheerleader-relaxing/ .

Please take a look.

I have double checked rules for all link lists on warning page, but maybe I am missing something.

What should I change before I submit this site?

Thanks for your time.

Titan

[FTS]

doesnt look too bad, should get accepted to most places...

the front page is a little cluttered, but thats not really a problem, i'd space out the enter link a bit more..

[DangerDave]

Dual enter link..

"blah blah blah

OR

blah blah blah"


Will get you rejected in some places.

IMO, make the enter link clear and give the sponsor link some more "sell".

DD

[Titan]

FTS & DangerDave :
Thanks for advice. I have updated warning page.

DangerDave:
How can I apply for "Submit Licence" code for DangerDave.com.au?


Titan

[Dylan]

Your gallery listing page needs some sales text.

Also avoid using the same sales text and banners on each of your gallery pages.

[Titan]

Dylan:
Thanks for your comment. I have submitted site as it is now. I am inpatient to see who will list it and how everything will go.

I will try to create some better sales text on my second site.