how are these galleries??

[babymaker]

here are 3 recent galleries i made i am pretty new at gallery building but like it much more than free sites! my galleries have been getting accepted amost everywhere i submit so they must be ok and i have 2 partnership accounts i am going to apply for more. just wanted honest opinions on then from people who have been around awhile. plus conversions not so great??? should i change content sales text?? opinions welcomed, thanx!

|santa|


http://www.x-pix.us/galleries/voyeur/collegespycams/

http://www.x-pix.us/galleries/pregnant/pregnantsmokingfetish/

http://www.x-pix.us/galleries/teen/tabitha/

[GeorgeTH]

Don't you know that smoking when pregnant can harm the baby?

LOL

The galleries are very 90s... I don't know if many big sites would still list them. The first (Voyeur Dorm) conflicts with the common rule of most TGPs: series!!! = same person(s) + same background!

Sorry- it's Monday morning - not a time or day to be cheerful
|violin|

[Stouch]

What George says, but I will add a couple more things. On the first try to ditch the URL on the thumbs. Its ok on big pics but doesnt look too good on thumbs.

Second one I agree with George totally ;)

Third one, maybe consider putting it all in a table to try to structure it a bit better. Also if you look at that second row of thumbs, they are too samey. You should maybe consider this:

1st thumb as it is - 2nd thumb a pussy closeup - 3rd thumb maybe as it is or a tits & pussy shot - 4th thumb a close up of her sucking her thumb.

Also try to sharpen the pics a bit.