Free site review, please...

[Dagwolf]

Ok, I haven't built any free sites for a while... Tell me how I'm doing. Does this fit the general submission rules (other than the lack of reciprocals?)

http://shagcity.com/free/cootercleavage1/

[Greenguy]

1st page is left aligned, 2nd page is centered, galleries are left aligned.

The default font style & size makes the pages look sorta blah.

[Ramster]

Looks kind of plain but not bad.

Center align All pages. Make the gallery links easier to find to get listed. You are missing a picture in gallery 2.

[RawAlex]

I am not a big fan of hiding the gallery links inside a bunch of text. Your gallery links should be much more clear.

You certainly need to work on fonts and stuff as well, you can really add some zing to the site with the right looking fonts and colors.

Red and dark blue are the two hardest colors to get to show properly on a monitor. Avoid them for any important text.

:-)

Alex

[Dagwolf]

Ok, I resized the text, changed the text color and font, and fixed the broken image link.

How does it look now?

Edit: I also realigned all the pages and made the gallery links more visible... although I'd much rather have the surfer read the text before going on to the free galleries. :p

[Greenguy]

Looks alot better now :)