please review

[HonestMichael]

hy, all!
..as i´m pretty much a noob, could you please have a look at this freesite and tell me your opinions?
http://www.tangatanga.de/footfetish1/hotfootfetishactionoverhere.html

thanxx.

[HonestMichael]

@greenguy:
a hundred'n somethin views and no reply, could you please close this thread? ;)
and yep, i see i've probably posted this into the wrong category, sorry for that.

[Kezza]

Hello Michael

Not sure why you havent received any replies, but I do think you posted in the correct forum.

Just a couple of quick points about your site:

1. on your warning and Main page the layout is off to the right Try and center is so it looks a bit more appealling. And you could perhaps make better use of the entire screen

2. In your galleries - they scroll on an 800x600 layout. This would be rejected by many Link lists.

3. Your site title sounds more like a description.

Hope this helps. I am sure others will add more constructive comments for you

Kezza

[HonestMichael]

thanks, kezza!!!
..now i'll go and fix that :)

[MadMax]

I agree with Kezza. To add a couple notes:

You should move your title to the top of the warning page.

That big square graphic is taking up a lot of real estate on all your pages for something that isn't linked to anything. It pulls attention away from your ads/pics and doesn't give you anything in return.

The site needs to be cleaned up a bit, but it's not bad for an early attempt. Keep at it, and try going to some of the link lists that you want to list you and looking at a bunch of other sites to get a feel for what's out there. Being different is a great thing, but as a noob you can learn a lot from others just by looking at what they're doing.

Keep it up!

[Greenguy]

Sorry about that HonestMichael - I do usually reply to these but I must've missed it :(

Kezza & MadMax are pointing you in the right direction :)